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waitin for this day

Postby Ka0t1c » Jun 6th, '08, 05:37

I've been waitin for this day to go back to the state where many of my great friends stay
so may my plane not delay I pray, I should have a lot to say and I aint afraid to explain

I got to train with the strong and the brave, we bonded and became brothers
not all the same pains we've suffered along our way

cuz I was haunted by the others, thought I was the one who'd decay
but I remained tough, it started in my brain, then challenges changed

I found powerful strength to encounter strange talents who I wanted to face
and as I wandered on base I wondered my fate cuz guns and Talibans aren't that safe...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: waitin for this day

Postby Kosovic » Jun 6th, '08, 08:24

And thats all?
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Re: waitin for this day

Postby Ka0t1c » Jun 6th, '08, 16:34

hahaha, no...the end.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: waitin for this day

Postby Kosovic » Jun 6th, '08, 16:49

aaaaa ok
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Re: waitin for this day

Postby Ka0t1c » Jun 6th, '08, 18:33

no, this is the way i see it...

instead of writin about it, im actually going there to tell them face to face
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: waitin for this day

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jun 6th, '08, 18:48

Its kind of simple, but i guess it's ok so far.
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Re: waitin for this day

Postby Ka0t1c » Jun 6th, '08, 19:51

im just happy that im gonna see my friends!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: waitin for this day

Postby Kosovic » Jun 6th, '08, 19:54

See who? And tell them what?
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