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Postby Robbie G » Jun 14th, '08, 03:41

I kinda like this..it has more of a horrorcore kind of taste. I;ve been listening to too much Jedi Mind Tricks. :p


Im a dirty player, havent read the rules
the demon slayer, sharp weapons as my tools
can't content with the skill, or with the mind
because I spit fire still, FUCK YOU is too kind
your bones look soft, and your ams flimsy
break you like laura croft, I didn't like what you give-me
violence is the way to go, bloody knifes and arms
agings way to slow, dumpin bodies on old farms
you won't have no eyes or ears, when I take em out
your worst nightmare and fears, pluck em as you shout
the devils spawn i'm satan, red as fire I burn and spit sparks
giving hell to all who are hatin', bullets for your smart remarks
Been alive for many years, will never behave or be kind
while you die lets see tears, it's G.L the enemy of mankind


also:

I tell you rest in peace before you're even dead
while you stand confused i'm tearing off your head
and now my hands are red, dirty of the deed I said
I'm guilty and yet innocent musta slept in O.J's bed
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Re: Anyone like this?

Postby Emadyville » Jun 14th, '08, 05:58

Who is that from? Liked the OJ line btw
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Anyone like this?

Postby Robbie G » Jun 14th, '08, 14:37

Yeah, of course I wrote it. :y:

Thanks.
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Re: Anyone like this?

Postby Solace » Jun 14th, '08, 15:05

Hhaha i liked it. Especially the O.J line :P Also i like this one

the devils spawn i'm satan, red as fire I burn and spit sparks
giving hell to all who are hatin', bullets for your smart remarks


Great job :y: :happy:
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Re: Anyone like this?

Postby Jay-19 » Jun 14th, '08, 15:23

I liked it. I think horrorcore is cool as hell!

Ill Bill's the master of horrorcore! :worship:
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Re: Anyone like this?

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jun 14th, '08, 22:38

Nice lyrics. Keep it up.
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