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What Happened

Postby Rain Matrix » Jun 8th, '08, 21:28

I'm not sure where this Road Leads but I will not get Cold Feet
it's time to let my Flow Speak I'm not sure who it Won't Reach
tha situations Major I'm not here just to Say Words
I've never had much Paper why must we always Hate First
greed will destroy our Planet u won't see me help Plan It
all of us have to Manage to live without tha Damage
dealing with mental Anguish I'm not gonna be Branded
nor will I start to Panic starving for truth were Famished
staring at tha Smoke N Mirrors millions sit and Loathe In Fear
listen closely with Open Ears fake lines won't be Spoken Here
no one will ask how U Feel deception is their New Shield
reality is To Real that's tha weapon tha Fools Wield
they think they need More Power u hide behind War Cowards
crush a downer Snort Powder we'll sit and wait For Ours

Copyright Rain Matrix... deal with it lol
Last edited by Rain Matrix on Jun 23rd, '08, 21:43, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: What Happened

Postby Kosovic » Jun 8th, '08, 21:32

its meh
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Re: What Happened

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 8th, '08, 21:38

Wow man. BY FAR your sickest rap you've ever spit, lol. Your rhyme-structure was on-point throughout the whole thing. The flow was sick and your lyrics were VERY dope. Really impressed with this peice here man. So keep that shit up for sure. You're one of the best writting here.
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Re: What Happened

Postby Dark Blue » Jun 8th, '08, 21:42

that was nice good job
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Re: What Happened

Postby Ethos » Jun 9th, '08, 08:45

I hella like it. the rhymes flowed smoothly. :y:
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Re: What Happened

Postby Jay-19 » Jun 11th, '08, 16:43

Crazy shit man! i liked it. A lot! :worship:
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Re: What Happened

Postby theJFKshow » Jun 11th, '08, 17:41

I like.
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Re: What Happened

Postby Xplode » Jun 16th, '08, 07:56

wow niceeeeeeeeee
So Long Bitch U Did Me So Wrong
I Dont Want To Go On
Living In This World Without
You...........
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