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Rappers Dilema!!!

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Rappers Dilema!!!

Postby judah » Jun 18th, '08, 15:38

Now you tell me what to do when I cant do what am supposed to
Should I quit my dreams or keeping moving through
I am starting to get crazy Thinking myself maybe
I'try something else instead of this rap mainstream
should I act like shady or just souljaboy myself
my intention is to be an Mc not just going after money health
I spit realness cause this rhymes are my mind and my heart
and when I feel that i failed My soul tears apart
should I quit school act a fool or rap it up full
but how? (cause)
if I dont put money in table my head will grow a pair of bulls
I am trying to do $ and do what I love
working straight 8 hours do u think that I what I am found of?
I go back home and I try to be a good father and Husband
But not enough time with Fam and cuming quick when fucking thats a problem
need to write down my life in this white paper and pray
That this rap game will be opened harms for me too some day.
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Re: Rappers Dilema!!!

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jun 18th, '08, 16:01

some didnt make,and it was off flow a lot. some kinda basic rhymes too. keep working.
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