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NEW STEVE SPAG - Drop The Bomb

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NEW STEVE SPAG - Drop The Bomb

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 17th, '08, 22:17

Well I wrote this peice here yesterday at the studio. It's not the best thing, but it's not too bad. What I like most about this is the flow, and I wish I had the beat to share with you guys, but it's not finished and we're still working on it. The last line also has a different flow than most of the rap, so this may be hard to get, lol. But hopefully you understand it, and enjoy. As usual, all feedback is appreciated.

We're 'bout to blow at any minute, competition's in the dust//
You should all bow down to our feet because for me winning's a must//
I don't fuck with anybody, that doesn't fuck with us//
Put your money on the table, grab your cards and hold 'em up//
It's time to show who's the realest and which hoes are not to trust//
Who's as focused as we are? Ain't none of us is being touched//
Because all day we are composing, fixin' stuff and smokin' blunts//
Yo pass the dutchie to the left and I will toke it 'til it's done//
I'm like a motherfuckin' Prophet, I see who's the Chosen One//
Steven Spag if you don't know, I am a pro and I just won//
Everybody up against me, come approach me you get stuck//
Frozen stickin' to the ground these are my words you can not duck//
And I don't wanna take your shit, so quit your joking little chump//
You're gonna push me to the edge, soon you'll be choking on your lung//
You ain't half the man I am, you got some broken dirty nuts//
You claim to bust in some bitches, but nah you bust in a cup//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Drop The Bomb

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jun 17th, '08, 22:29

finally someone uses a fuckin multi or 2 haha
it started off real strong and kept it some what through out...
i liked it good job man..,..
keep it up
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Drop The Bomb

Postby robert20032 » Jun 17th, '08, 23:35

Didnt lyke it
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Drop The Bomb

Postby Emadyville » Jun 18th, '08, 00:34

Thought it was good, started strong and faded a bit, but pretty sick.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Drop The Bomb

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 18th, '08, 17:51

Thanks for the feed guys. Like I said, I know this ain't the best, deffinetly not even close to what I'm used to doing, lol.
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