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True Story

Postby -[Zach]- » Jun 14th, '08, 06:57

she says she'll do anythin for a dolla, gettin busters to holla
she got all the looks, its what her money has bought her
lost herself in her own greed, and its sad that she can't even see
what shes doin to herself, its a self-inflicted tragedy
plannin these practical schemes to play a buster 4 a dummy
ugly inside, pretty on the out and its how shes makin her money
its funny 'cause she said she would never end up like this
but its my sympathy for her story that made me write this
a slight twist of her hips and busters start runnin
they don't know where they're goin but shes sure gettin them comin
lovin the attention but can't bare to stare at herself in the mirror
look inside her eyes, shes cryin loudly but its like no one can hear her
silently she'll deal with the pain alone, feeling forever lost
through the struggle she'll continue on at whatever the cost
shes never known happiness, she comes from a broken home
and by the time she was 7 her daddy was gone
her mother became a drug addict, developed the worst habit
she couldn't stand it, ran away hopin to never move back in
she was once pure but by 13 she was workin the corner
seen shit that would weaken even the strongest mind and ignored those who warned her
she had all the money but never felt any love
so she decided to try and find some in drugs
cocaine became the name of her closest friend
slowly changin but no one was noticin
she was hopin her death would come sooner rather than later
but she still hoped one day for her personal superman to save her
by the time she was 18 things started changin, too much drugs and sex had her lookin 40
her soul was bleeding, eyes pleading for help and her heart was filled with worry
she could no longer wait to be rescued, so she put her fate in her own hands
put the pistol to her head, pulled the trigger and died never knowing the love of no man
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: True Story

Postby -[Zach]- » Jun 15th, '08, 06:05

lol my bad. i appreciate the honesty though. thanks.
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: True Story

Postby Nu Syd » Jun 15th, '08, 08:01

nice read
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Re: True Story

Postby -[Zach]- » Jun 15th, '08, 08:23

thank you.
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: True Story

Postby Robbie G » Jun 16th, '08, 01:11

That was great...

Honestly I feel sad now.
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Re: True Story

Postby -[Zach]- » Jun 16th, '08, 06:40

lol thats because i write nothing but powerful pieces of peotry lol just playing...but thank you for the comment.
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: True Story

Postby judah » Jun 19th, '08, 15:19

Some Brenda's got a baby in it...
However she wasnt pregnant...

An old Rap concept but still a fresh true all around the world.

Still I liked it :y:
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Re: True Story

Postby -[Zach]- » Jun 20th, '08, 05:31

thank you for the comment. very appreciated.
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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