8 lines added from the end of verse one(give feedback)

[Darkblade44431]

thanks man. lol,however,i think it's ok,imo it didn't even compare to first verse. i will redo 2nd verse and have changed the last few lines on the first verse

[Boston]

i like the first verse better, flow seems to be mostly there
and for some reason, i cant see why, but i find it catchy
just the way you wrote it, and good to see some multis in there
i think you can do better on the second verse, but good to see you improving

if you can please feed on my Im Me verse, thanks.

[Darkblade44431]

thanks 4 feedback. and ok

[<Stiiccy>]

thanks 4 feedback. and ok

yo homie you ever gonna feed my shit hahaha

[Darkblade44431]

yeh, i posted on ur newest audio. i cant listen atm, i'm on my wii. when i go to library next, i will.