Im Me Verse

[Boston]

new verse i wrote
tell me what yall think if yall got time
thanks

*edit* for the record, the Farmers car line, farmer is the last name of my friend who i was going to do the track with, just trying to clear that up.

expectations high now, man i got a lot to prove/
came in as a poor man, i dont got a lot to lose/
but i got a lot to say, so im not about to move/
just took the saftey off, racing off, about to shoot/
i got my fire back, yes that burn to fire back/
no shoe prints or tire tracks, blue prints or wires tapped/
like an alcoholic we can take it from bar to bar/
talking wreckless, leave you dead in the back of Farmer's car/
im not an angry person, i just get provoked quick/
runnin' your mouth will guarantee to get your throat slit/
your life is hope-less, i hope you know this/
i got the full clip to show you this aint bull shit/
so sick n' tired of bitches crying n' talking shit/
so sick n tired of snitches whining n walking big/
ho bitch is hiding, where the fuck is jon robinson/
n when i see you i guarantee you wont walk again/

[Steve Spag]

Hahahaha. Sickkkk verse bro. Really celeverly written, and the flow was crazy for it. One of the best I've seen from you for sure.

"im not an angry person, i just get provoked quick/
runnin' your mouth will guarantee to get your throat slit/
your life is hope-less, i hope you know this/
i got the full clip to show you this aint bull shit/"

and

"expectations high now, man i got a lot to prove/
came in as a poor man, i dont got a lot to lose/
but i got a lot to say, so im not about to move/
just took the saftey off, racing off, about to shoot/"

Those were my fav. parts.

If you could check out my new peice "Half The Man" and leave some feed I'd appreciate it too.

Thanks and peaceee.

[Solace]

Thanks for checking out mine, so im checking out this. Its good, and i liked what Steve Spag liked. These lines in particular:

"im not an angry person, i just get provoked quick/
runnin' your mouth will guarantee to get your throat slit/
your life is hope-less, i hope you know this/
i got the full clip to show you this aint bull shit/"

I this gunna be recorded at anytime?

[Boston]

thanks yall
sorry for the late feed steve.
and once i get into the studio, i might record dis

[Solace]

I also really liked the last line.

"n when i see you i guarantee you wont walk again/"

[Darkblade44431]

i thought the lines were just simple, but other ppl didnt seem to find your lines a problem, so i'm probably just retarded, but w/e. flow is good, keep at it.

[Boston]

thanks

[Boston]

audio added in audio section

*not studio quality* but peep anyways please. thanks