jus a lil sumthin' 4 my 1st post

[lilrossy]

Chill while i spill sum ill skill,
still deez rhymes dat i reveal have unreal appeal,
im surreal, i thrill, hittin hard as steel,
but rappers can't deal wit the rhymes dat i fullfill,
cuz i kill mics, rip em' like steel spikes,
put mc's on hikes, im reachin new hieghts like kites,
everynight, make rappers recite and rewrite,
they be like, damn, can't let a white be better at wat we write.

jus sumthin' i put together cuz i was bored

tryin 2 get better so feedbak plz

[gladimnotsoluble]

that would have been good.

if it was a freestyle

[Rapsoldier101]

i wasnt really feelin it....it was almost like u were just rhyming words and not really sayin nothin

[lilrossy]

yeah i know wat u mean

thnx 4 da feedbak