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I beg theee

Postby Kosovic » Jun 25th, '08, 22:08

Please dont call the t-pain voice "autotune" again. It really insults my knowledge on frequencies and as a soundsmith.
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Re: I beg theee

Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jun 25th, '08, 22:09

*locks topic
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Re: I beg theee

Postby Kosovic » Jun 25th, '08, 22:20

U cant lock topics.
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Re: I beg theee

Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Jun 25th, '08, 22:21

sorry, you cant post anymore i locked this
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Re: I beg theee

Postby Kosovic » Jun 25th, '08, 22:23

:unsure: really?
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Postby Cwayon_Murder » Jun 25th, '08, 22:25

It's true.
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Re: I beg theee

Postby Kosovic » Jun 25th, '08, 22:33

Whats true?
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Postby Cwayon_Murder » Jun 25th, '08, 22:34

It.
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Re: I beg theee

Postby Kosovic » Jun 25th, '08, 22:36

Remove the "it" pronoun, and insert the subject noun.
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Re: I beg theee

Postby Cwayon_Murder » Jun 25th, '08, 22:42

It is summer. I have no time to think of English class.
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Re: I beg theee

Postby Kosovic » Jun 25th, '08, 22:43

U are american, you dont have to think about english.
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Postby Cwayon_Murder » Jun 25th, '08, 22:46

This is true.
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Re: I beg theee

Postby JMG » Jun 25th, '08, 22:49

uh not one word rhymed,no flow at all. this needs alot of work
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

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