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Acid

Postby Greeeeeeg69 » Jul 2nd, '08, 23:13

My life is a disaster everyday is a new hell
ill die faster anyway with this handy blue spell
its only a little bottle filled with acid
only the finest, brewed from lake placid
one shot of this shit will have you trippin
sooner or later youll probly start grippin
youll fall on the ground, loose your mind
shit so strong you may end up blind
makes you forget the troubles your in
but hurts in your eyes like a store pin
i dont give a fuck bout what you say
i truthfully cant find any other way
to escape this life of shit and hell
or even find a way to quit the swell
of my brain down cause of your shit
this is why i continue to spit
Go fuck yourself i fucking quit.



So? :y: ? or :n: ?
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Re: Acid

Postby Kosovic » Jul 2nd, '08, 23:35

I will quote one of ur lyrics (the only one i 've read).

"My life is a disaster"....yes your life is a disaster.
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Re: Acid

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 2nd, '08, 23:37

Greeeeeeg69 wrote:My life is a disaster everyday is a new hell
ill die faster anyway with this handy blue spell
its only a little bottle filled with acid
only the finest, brewed from lake placid
one shot of this shit will have you trippin
sooner or later youll probly start grippin
youll fall on the ground, loose your mind
shit so strong you may end up blind
makes you forget the troubles your in
but hurts in your eyes like a store pin
i dont give a fuck bout what you say
i truthfully cant find any other way
to escape this life of shit and hell
or even find a way to quit the swell
of my brain down cause of your shit
this is why i continue to spit
Go fuck yourself i fucking quit.



So? :y: ? or :n: ?

Losing My Mind would never happen
Cuz I live in peace while you in sin
I wouldnt lose it and drop to the floor
because im the soldier who never blows his composure and dats for sure
when life gets hard and it becomes hell
you keep going stay quiet dont yell
your right when you say ill be grippin
cuz me losing my sanity would be trippin
get that bottle of acid
and trash it
enough bullshit
no time to quit
get up keep going theres more for life
many experiences jobs kids and a beautiful wife
when you think theres no more to live drop the knife
cuz u cnt choose when to end
cuz life is a ride not a lend.

I liek that freestyle you did its nice I say: :n: jp :y:
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Re: Acid

Postby Solace » Jul 3rd, '08, 00:35

The Toy Soldier wrote:
Greeeeeeg69 wrote:My life is a disaster everyday is a new hell
ill die faster anyway with this handy blue spell
its only a little bottle filled with acid
only the finest, brewed from lake placid
one shot of this shit will have you trippin
sooner or later youll probly start grippin
youll fall on the ground, loose your mind
shit so strong you may end up blind
makes you forget the troubles your in
but hurts in your eyes like a store pin
i dont give a fuck bout what you say
i truthfully cant find any other way
to escape this life of shit and hell
or even find a way to quit the swell
of my brain down cause of your shit
this is why i continue to spit
Go fuck yourself i fucking quit.



So? :y: ? or :n: ?

Losing My Mind would never happen
Cuz I live in peace while you in sin
I wouldnt lose it and drop to the floor
because im the soldier who never blows his composure and dats for sure
when life gets hard and it becomes hell
you keep going stay quiet dont yell
your right when you say ill be grippin
cuz me losing my sanity would be trippin
get that bottle of acid
and trash it
enough bullshit
no time to quit
get up keep going theres more for life
many experiences jobs kids and a beautiful wife
when you think theres no more to live drop the knife
cuz u cnt choose when to end
cuz life is a ride not a lend.

I liek that freestyle you did its nice I say: :n: jp :y:


Why are you freestyling on this guys freestyle?
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Re: Acid

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 3rd, '08, 01:17

I dunno I just Do I visualized the mic on the floor wen he stopped so i picked it up

ok that was stupid but idk i guess i shouldnt
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Re: Acid

Postby Kosovic » Jul 3rd, '08, 01:22

U praise the "mic" more than ancient civilisation praised their pagan gods.

A microphone is way to turn mechanic waves (vocal sound) into electromagnetic waves. Its nothing more.
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Re: Acid

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 3rd, '08, 01:23

Kosovic wrote:U praise the "mic" more than ancient civilisation praised their pagan gods.

A microphone is way to turn mechanic waves (vocal sound) into electromagnetic waves. Its nothing more.

yes the mic is my best friend
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Re: Acid

Postby Kosovic » Jul 3rd, '08, 02:28

Yeah i can tell.
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Re: Acid

Postby Greeeeeeg69 » Jul 3rd, '08, 21:00

how bout sum fucking critisism instead of arguing
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