Zombiesss

[Big B]

My first attempt dont go to hard on me .

im a blood thirsty cannibal even worse than Hannibal
when your feeling that tangible weather ill strap you to my leather
makes the taste better and bite your body you think im an oddie
ill be licking my fingers while the stench of your rotting body lingers
while she thinsk theres a chance to recover I tell her I love her
then I disemember her like her brother remember
she’ll be my last like the month of December
all this time past and my victim list vast
after I had bit ‘em it was time to take her transparent gem
now its time for that parent when I grab hair and bend

[The Toy Soldier]

My first attempt dont go to hard on me .

im a blood thirsty cannibal even worse than Hannibal
when your feeling that tangible weather ill strap you to my leather
makes the taste better and bite your body you think im an oddie
ill be licking my fingers while the stench of your rotting body lingers
while she thinsk theres a chance to recover I tell her I love her
then I disemember her like her brother remember
she’ll be my last like the month of December
all this time past and my victim list vast
after I had bit ‘em it was time to take her transparent gem
now its time for that parent when I grab hair and bend

meh its alright but you still have lots to learn dont ryhme because you can
do it because it it sounds good

while she thinsk theres a chance to recover I tell her I love her
then I disemember her like her brother remember

those lines feel a little forced.

[Emadyville]

What toy soldier said, just make yourself as unique as possible too, don't try to rhyme/sound/talk like other rappers, need to stand out some.

[Xray]

hahaha zombie pride nice shit man

[Kosovic]

Hannibal wasnt a cannibal. He was a king.

[Big B]

Hannibal wasnt a cannibal. He was a king.

hannibal was a cannibalistic serial killer.

[Kosovic]

Hannibal wasnt a cannibal. He was a king.

hannibal was a cannibalistic serial killer.

I love American infuence over the western world. Before 1700 = no world exists.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hannibal

[Greeeeeeg69]

who cares
its was okay bro but needs sume better ryhmes

[o0_mcbryde_0o]

It was fuckin baws

[Big B]

It was fuckin baws

be gone fool.

[o0_mcbryde_0o]

It was fuckin baws

be gone fool.

why right so gay ya dick me and yoo in a battle now

[The Toy Soldier]

It was fuckin baws

be gone fool.

why right so gay ya dick me and yoo in a battle now

quit acting all hard i accepted ur faggot ass challenge and if i beat u youll shut the fuck up about how people suck and they're wannabes and shit cuz u act all hard and ur a fucking noob so bring it u fag ill face u in a battle rap right now

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

mcbryde mate you just got done

[SkinNBlista]

*tumble weed rolls by as theme tune plays*
LOL