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Written Freestyle

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Written Freestyle

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jul 9th, '08, 20:45

I didn't really feel like writing an actual song, so i wrote a freestyle, which is like just basically not having a main point(hence the word freestyle) but it's written. It also may sound off flow if you read this incorrectly. But i wanted to do a little something like this for my mixtape. do you think i should put this written freestyle on my mixtape?

um..lol, some of this may not make sense. and some of it might, and some of it you are possibly reading wrong, lol, such as the first two lines, they make sense.
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Yo
i'm the....
crazy mutha fucka with the crackin back
lazily a putter, hit the wack raps back
hazy is the utter from my style that's phat
blankly you still stutter with the blackened fat
blatantly cause shudders from this stackin rap
take from me that shucks cannot get up to stat
aim and squeeze at me if you cant take this subvene
.....substantial amount...
.....of intellectual writing
tamest fiend you'll ever meet, use pen to pencil fighting
shame on teams or groups or gangs, use skin to slit through, hiding
cuz they know....that they rhymes is weak
must take those....rappers lives at peak
bust they flow....playin hide and seek
just made goals....occupied all week
but stay close....if you high on weed
cuz they know...you got wired beats
infinite words flyin....my tied mind is beat.
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