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Postby gladimnotsoluble » Jul 8th, '08, 01:25

I don't expect much.


I'm so complex, my songset is on the calm, but wrong breath
When dawn lets, the palms sweat, and nervous I am
My pawns that, are in my control like conquest
It's unfortunate how I roll like a 'Nam Vet
My service is breaking your cervix
Imperfect is just not my verdict

Yes this is another rhyme, praising how good I am
Trying to utilize my time, raising my foot again
Till I smash the gas, Pedals down and snap
Clash and crash, plastered back, like a massive attack
On this brilliant, psycho laden, master track

Nope, I guess i'm not different then any other rapper
I'm just generic, "Oh look how good I am" Except I can say it faster
There must be merit, but I can't trust my larynx
How can I be different, my lyrics just rhyme to rhyme
I guess I should go to prison, or sell some drugs from time to time
Wish I could tell a story and say +Baby Don't Cry+
Or have +Suicidal Thoughts+ in the back of my mind
Or welcome myself saying, +Hi, My Name is+ me
I'm the illest rapper and dopest MC
'Cept I can't freestyle, write rhymes, tell stories, or make beats
Yeah, that's me.
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Postby Solace » Jul 8th, '08, 02:51

I liked it man! :y: I really liked how you were stating the facts how your just another rapper, nothing too special. Another rhymer that talks about how good he is. :y: It flowed well to me, I'd like to hear an instrumental/beat that would work for this. Anyways, keep it up, when you post more stuff up I'll be checkin it out.

PS. This gunna be recorded??
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Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 9th, '08, 02:07

Although the instrumental may not exist it would sound pretty good with a saying goodbye to hollywood one
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Postby gladimnotsoluble » Jul 9th, '08, 03:47

Hey thanks both you guys for taking the time and actually reading that long thing. I appreciate it, and will return the love
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Postby Kosovic » Jul 9th, '08, 03:51

i am not bored and i dont have some time.
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Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 9th, '08, 03:59

Kosovic wrote:i am not bored and i dont have some time.

he meant me and shaydmademe
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Postby gladimnotsoluble » Jul 9th, '08, 04:00

That's cool Kosovic, i'm glad though that you have enough time to type that out
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Postby Kosovic » Jul 9th, '08, 04:13

ah forget it then.
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Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 9th, '08, 04:24

big props to u on this drop

I appreciate seeing such work as I thrive in a world of artistic essence
anyway most think I'm a wierdo with a ego for nothing and their right

I'm am but a shell of a man filled up with lyrics to make me nutty ;)

keep writing please :y:
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Postby gladimnotsoluble » Jul 9th, '08, 04:40

Ahahahaha thanks man
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Postby Solace » Jul 9th, '08, 20:31

i just dont understand one thing. What does larynx mean, and how do you pronounce it?
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Postby Solace » Jul 9th, '08, 20:36

Chet wrote:
shadymademe wrote:i just dont understand one thing. What does larynx mean, and how do you pronounce it?

it's ur voice box

Ohk thanks, how do you pronounce it?
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Postby gladimnotsoluble » Jul 9th, '08, 21:27

(LAIR-ing-X)
rhymes with merit and generic, except instead of T or C, you put an X
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Postby Kosovic » Jul 9th, '08, 21:40

You just screwed up the word.

Its writter Λαρυγγξ and you pronounce it la-ry-ngx. stretch the A.
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