Punchlines .... fuck what u heard

[So AmAzIn!!!]

LOOK YOUR FINISHED When i PUT YOU DIPSHITS.. On a HOOK AN FISH IT!
i leave tha basics u see an hate it though u 'Read Amazin' like tha BOOK OF GUINNESS!
Realize with real eyes i LOVE IT AN FACE IT. Tha PUNCHES? OUTRAGOUS!
So stop FRONTIN YAH LAME SHIT. cous wack bars gets 'clapped hard' like a HUNDRED OVATIONS!
My FLOWS THA GREATEST. While YOURS IS BASIC. Homey, Its SO AMAZIN!!!
so whos gotchu Gassed to say you half as great? Dog you betta 'have-tha-blade' like ROLLER SKATIN!
I MERK IN RAP. You Aint DeSERVIN HALF. Yah WORK IS 'GASSED'!. Juss Like BURNIN TRASH!
it aint WORTH THA LAST so dont start rappin now Cause i 'clap at clowns' like CIRCUS ACTS!
SO's THA DON HOLDIN GLOCKS Dat'll SWOLL YAH TOP! Yah Text Funny, Your JOKES ARE NOT!
My FLOWS IS HOT While YOURS IS NOT So Am i scared? no i woudnt 'fear-o' if i was a POKEMON!

EASY!..... ZZZZZzzzz Das Why i Sleep On Yall Wack Text^

[Kosovic]

Its shit. Get outta here.

[So AmAzIn!!!]

Its shit. Get outta here.

Whats So Shit About It? Explanation..

[Kosovic]

Its shit. Get outta here.

Whats So Shit About It? Explanation..

The whole thing, i dont care to explain, have someone else do it.

[So AmAzIn!!!]

Its shit. Get outta here.

Whats So Shit About It? Explanation..

The whole thing, i dont care to explain, have someone else do it.

O'k Juss Name 1 Thing Then

[Kosovic]

The multies. I dont like them. Keep it simple.
The structure. Write lines, instead.
The point/meaning. You really aint saying anything.

[So AmAzIn!!!]

The multies. I dont like them. Keep it simple.
The structure. Write lines, instead.
The point/meaning. You really aint saying anything.

Multie - Well i Chose Them, So i Do Like Them
Structure - Its Text Not Audio
Meaning - Im Usin Punchline, Its Not a Song Just Practise

Nothin Really I Can Use To Improve...

[Kosovic]

I didnt say anything for u to improve. Oh, you are new one so i will explain to u a bit about me and the rest. Well....i am the local asshole, as u imagined so far. Everyone else will waste their 5 minutes trying to give u a review about what u did good, what u did bad, and how to improve. Me, i will waste my 5 minutes explaining to you why i wont do that. And i wont do that because, i dont care if u gonna improve or not, it just happened to click and enter to ur topic, i skimmed through what u wrote, and i didnt like it, so i just told u that i didnt. Simple as that.

[So AmAzIn!!!]

I didnt say anything for u to improve. Oh, you are new one so i will explain to u a bit about me and the rest. Well....i am the local asshole, as u imagined so far. Everyone else will waste their 5 minutes trying to give u a review about what u did good, what u did bad, and how to improve. Me, i will waste my 5 minutes explaining to you why i wont do that. And i wont do that because, i dont care if u gonna improve or not, it just happened to click and enter to ur topic, i skimmed through what u wrote, and i didnt like it, so i just told u that i didnt. Simple as that.

... O'k then

[Kosovic]

Satisfied? NEEEEEEEEEEXT.

[Arabian Shady]

I didnt say anything for u to improve. Oh, you are new one so i will explain to u a bit about me and the rest. Well....i am the local asshole, as u imagined so far. Everyone else will waste their 5 minutes trying to give u a review about what u did good, what u did bad, and how to improve. Me, i will waste my 5 minutes explaining to you why i wont do that. And i wont do that because, i dont care if u gonna improve or not, it just happened to click and enter to ur topic, i skimmed through what u wrote, and i didnt like it, so i just told u that i didnt. Simple as that.

^ lmfao, ...so tru

@ amazing:dont mind kos he like that 2 every 1,i thought that was pretty kool,the meta's and multis were a significant aid for this piece,i did have some problems with the flow,structure has to be maintained at all times so try workin on that ,
other than it it was a good drop,
peace

[Ka0t1c]

you have very creative punches, you are welcome here if you ask me!

you need to improve on your vocab a bit

this part i didn't like but then again i never watched poke'mon:

So Am i scared? no i woudnt 'fear-o' if i was a POKEMON!