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Freestyle IIII

Postby JMG » Jul 14th, '08, 05:22

yo i just smoked a blunt my minds blew
im higher then albert enstiens I Q
girl be my valentine or ill tie u
to the chair as i recline u
whys she screamin she knows she likes it
she leaked with exitment when i exposed my privates
i pulled out my golden knife with a fresh cut blade
told her to dress up like a french slut maid
and dust while i i analy forked her
its bascially tourture u no every grape in the orchard
she aint my slave but i force it to do unwillinly things
come chill with me babe after its over
we can be friends u dont have to be older
i got a mack in the holster
got dressed and went to iraq as a solider
and set free fire
to the friendy fighters
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Re: Freestyle IIII

Postby Solace » Jul 14th, '08, 09:18

Really good for a freestyle, and funny :y: :y: Good job man.

she leaked with exitment when i exposed my privates
i pulled out my golden knife with a fresh cut blade
told her to dress up like a french slut maid
and dust while i i analy forked her
its bascially tourture u no every grape in the orchard


basically the best part imo.
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Re: Freestyle IIII

Postby Greeeeeeg69 » Jul 15th, '08, 01:18

fuck that bro anal is for losers
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Re: Freestyle IIII

Postby JMG » Jul 15th, '08, 01:26

thanks shady

and greg i suggest u stop now
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Re: Freestyle IIII

Postby Greeeeeeg69 » Jul 15th, '08, 01:26

or what youll write a freestyle bout me? tell me to fuck off?
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Re: Freestyle IIII

Postby JMG » Jul 15th, '08, 02:19

yeah
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Re: Freestyle IIII

Postby Solace » Jul 15th, '08, 02:20

Greeeeeeg69 wrote:or what youll write a freestyle bout me? tell me to fuck off?

hed freestyle a freestyle. not write one. :)
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Re: Freestyle IIII

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 15th, '08, 05:26

Greeeeeeg69 wrote:fuck that bro anal is for losers

wow its funny how u act hard but ur probably the skinniest weakest nerd on your block
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