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i never will settle at second

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i never will settle at second

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 13th, '08, 03:09

i never will settle at second in the battle field
cuz i have the skills so i'm ready for action
whether im packin steel or wreckin the set up
i bet im gon' still rep what i've been destined
i've built my own passage and killed above average
people as an assassin, yeah i deal with assholes
but to back up or wilt isnt the answer
im attracted to fulfillin whatever im asked of
my tasks to unshield the masks on the Devil
who thrills on collectin rebels by trillions to catch -
im reelin the net until they peal my cap back
i have mastered my drills, next im attackin
all children sit still cuz this is not actin
the facts are im not chillin, relaxin
these villains affect us and my message i feel
causes thrills and thats from my weapons
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: i never will settle at second

Postby Jay-19 » Jul 16th, '08, 00:46

That's pretty tight. But some lines should have rhymes in the ends, that way it'd be nicer. :y:
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Re: i never will settle at second

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 16th, '08, 03:54

it does rhyme if u rap it fast like me and use an accent on certain words, wish you could hear me then...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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