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Re: TR'S BEST LYRICIST Freestyle

Postby 4D » Jul 10th, '08, 13:56

Lol, thanks Kosovich.

Hey JMG, no offence man, but I had to post a little rhyme response. No diss intended, it's basically just an example of the level you would need to be at, to claim to be the "best".

You're Title readin' is quite misleadin', it's a Bible even of dumb simplicity,
So don't try defeatin' the rhyme-skill bringin' Michael Keaton of multiplicity,
It's such-a-diss-to me, 'cos I've touched-the-history of this Hip-Hop haven,
It's a known fact, that my gold raps have more phat than a chip shop apron
I`m in tip top shape from pumping iron, and I`m up 'n firin on all cylinders.
Hearda 4D's murder stories? MY purgatory's a tough environ to all visitors!


Not my best, I haven't rhymed in ages.
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Re: TR'S BEST LYRICIST Freestyle

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 10th, '08, 14:29

good shit fordie :8) i was coming in to say a similiar thing but you beat me to it :( lol good to see you aint dead for the seconds time :p
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Re: TR'S BEST LYRICIST Freestyle

Postby 4D » Jul 10th, '08, 14:33

Thanks Bar, you can't kill a bad thing! :smoking:
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Re: TR'S BEST LYRICIST Freestyle

Postby JMG » Jul 10th, '08, 15:09

none taken , keep in mind its a freestyle. i dont think im the best i just like pissin ppl off. i put u and mcmaybe above me, and trust me i got some shit comin.
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Re: TR'S BEST LYRICIST Freestyle

Postby Kosovic » Jul 10th, '08, 16:50

JMG wrote:none taken , keep in mind its a freestyle. i dont think im the best i just like pissin ppl off. i put u and mcmaybe above me, and trust me i got some shit comin.


:o oioi
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Re: TR'S BEST LYRICIST Freestyle

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 10th, '08, 17:29

JMG wrote:none taken , keep in mind its a freestyle. i dont think im the best i just like pissin ppl off. i put u and mcmaybe above me, and trust me i got some shit comin.

u should put waaaaay more people above you
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Re: TR'S BEST LYRICIST Freestyle

Postby Kosovic » Jul 10th, '08, 17:37

The Toy Soldier wrote:
JMG wrote:none taken , keep in mind its a freestyle. i dont think im the best i just like pissin ppl off. i put u and mcmaybe above me, and trust me i got some shit comin.

u should put waaaaay more people above you


But waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay more peoplpe above him.
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Re: TR'S BEST LYRICIST Freestyle

Postby Boston » Jul 17th, '08, 19:26

i think im better than you lol
well i know
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Re: TR'S BEST LYRICIST Freestyle

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jul 17th, '08, 19:56

Boston wrote:i think im better than you lol
well i know

Boston=fool
and not only does your name equal fool, but so does the city Boston, those dumb fucks believed that the little green dude from aqua teen hunger force flipping them off was a terrorist attack.
Now you tell me what's so smart about choosing that name?
don't answer that.
Retorical question, bitch.
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Re: TR'S BEST LYRICIST Freestyle

Postby JMG » Jul 17th, '08, 20:51

word dont be actin stupid
mister boston massachusetts
cuz ill come to your harbors ocean shore
and throw all ur crates of tea over board
then put a hole in your thinkin cap
u can go to hell and sit on satans lap
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