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Lol I was so bad.

Postby Solace » Jul 19th, '08, 03:20

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Re: I was bored, but check it out

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 19th, '08, 03:38

shadymademe wrote:Eh

my rhymes are tighter than your moms panties/
everyone likes to check them out 'cause they're so damn fancy/
tryin to be someone like P. Diddy/
i never really new that you could get so shitty/
acting like a genius whos got skills and street smarts/
all the beats you make started off as coughs and farts/
stop acting like you aint feeling this rhyme/
cause not feelin it should be a +true crime+/
I can out shine those in metal armor/
flunked out of kindergarten but Im still smarter,
than anyone who rapped on Tha Carter/

mah this one is all right i like the other one better
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Re: I was bored, but check it out

Postby Emadyville » Jul 19th, '08, 04:37

not too great
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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