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Re: That's My Life
by Emadyville » Jul 21st, '08, 03:11
Decent
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that
I love you Daren
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Re: That's My Life
by notoriouS-K-M » Jul 21st, '08, 15:36
Dude it's good. I don't know a lot but what I do know is that (for me atleast) it flowed and your rhymes were decent. You kept to the topic more or less. I guess the rhyme structure could have been better. But if i were to compare you with me then i would say you are god.
The Devil crept into heaven, God overslept on the 7th
The New World Order was born on September 11th
“Last words are for people, who haven’t said anything in life.” - Karl Marx
The New World Order was born on September 11th
“Last words are for people, who haven’t said anything in life.” - Karl Marx
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Re: That's My Life
by Solace » Jul 21st, '08, 21:33
notoriouS-K-M wrote:Dude it's good. I don't know a lot but what I do know is that (for me atleast) it flowed and your rhymes were decent. You kept to the topic more or less. I guess the rhyme structure could have been better. But if i were to compare you with me then i would say you are god.
Thanks a lot, im still beginning this writing stuff. Hopefully ill get better.
Emadyville wrote:Decent
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