Haters and Degraders

[SkinNBlista]

I got my mind spinnin coz i'm winnin
when i pick up these rhymes,
But they cant take it when your gonna make it
drag you down like "its mine!"
You aint got a right 2 stand up and do wats rite
coz they solve there problems with knives,
think i dont know, thats a show
Tryna bluff 2 their face...
To get away a price to pay
send bitches back into space.

I need anger management or i'm gonna end up in jail
I cant take it when I face it see you right to the core
Wince at the ugly, not superficially, do I have to say more

I aint a rhymer, just an old timer with my eye on the game
snakes in the grass kissin my ass Bitch ur goin up in flames

[SkinNBlista]

Mangan's Cork Afterparty JayZ

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Me far right

[Steve Spag]

How long have you been writting for? It's not bad, it's kinda generic, but at the same time it's cool 'cause it's a chick spittin' it. There arn't really a whole lot of rhymes in it, but there were a couple lines which I liked:

drag you down like "its mine!"
You aint got a right 2 stand up and do wats rite
coz they solve there problems with knives,

I aint a rhymer, just an old timer with my eye on the game
snakes in the grass kissin my ass Bitch ur goin up in flames

Keep up the good work though.
P.S. You're a pretty hot rapper, lmao.

[SkinNBlista]

I only found my Mojo
I'm hangin round with Rap Ireland doin a bit of
admin and design.

Your comments are appreciated, coz this the first one that I took time to make sense of cuz I'm talkin for real ya know!!

Preciate it

[mcZu]

not bad

Me far right

btw your beautifull , reall beautifull

[SkinNBlista]

Aw spank you

[mcZu]

Aw spank you

I'm getting a spank from you??......

[Enimee]

good lyrics

i like that plan to gain attention by postin a pick real imaginative sayin as there...well...nvm


but yeah good shyt i really could get into that and i liked the way you flowed it it was less original then the average

im an american idol
here to win the rap title
like the angel of death call me michael
but really inside im just a psyco

u switched up some witch made it less "generic" as someone said
plus you was speakin on some real shit which is always refreshing instead of the old

i got so many guns might as well call me the armed forces
no problems between me and you just dont step on my orange forces

ya know so yeah i def liked it and you should stick around and do some more postin up for my and other peoples readin pleasure u could really hone your skill and get good at it good luck

[SkinNBlista]

Aw thank you
really appreciate the encouragement too...

I would have liked to expand the
"solvin problems with knives" line coz this is a real issue hittin the news all the time in the UK and Ireland.

As for the haters, they know who they are (they aint on this site)

I posted the pic to show a lil wat i'm about: notice the Rap Ireland design and PR work.
Also to show I aint a bitch to chicks coz there's a lot of jealousy when your with a group
of homies workin, they think your competition or some shit, the guys are my buds and
we work together...

THats where the Rap came from, I was at my first gig and if looks could kill