G.I. Joe

[Ka0t1c]

even though i didnt wanna leave my home
it was me who chose to be a G.I. Joe
and now i see it so clearly where my feet should go
while i am steering, tryna keep me whole
by finding my bearing deep below

in the silence its buried but ill reach n pull
when the time does come nearing in my featured role
but why should i carry the leaders tone?
its cuz im finally hearing me speak my own
mind n im sharing my piece untold

theres no signs of me wearing
i seek my soul which likes to get airing
let all weakness stroll
by, im enduring my evils grown
surviving the daring lethal toll
of violence premeiring

i think you know my life isnt merry
but i need control of mine, yet it's very
steep this road i climb solitary....

[Emadyville]

Like the last 3 bars, overall not bad.

[Ka0t1c]

thanx and the reason y my structures weird is cuz i pause or change my tone there

[Emadyville]

I see, yeah man you always put some good shit on here, got to put some dope shit together for a full track.

[neversnooze]

this was pretty good G.I joe comparint urself to this soldier

[Ka0t1c]

i really am a soldier in the Army if u didn't know btw

[Nu Syd]

nice read, gets better as it goes on