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NEW STEVE SPAG - Face It

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 2nd, '08, 12:16

Just finished this peice here. I actually started it like last week but forgot about it, I only had 8 bars so I just finished up this verse. The beat is really sick, but it has waaaaaaay too many samples in it. It's called "Maybe Tomorrow" by VTZ on Soundclick is anyone's interested in hearing. The hook keeps repeating constantly, so I kinda wrote shit anyways like it was there, lol. Anyways, let me know what ya' think.

Straight up, I feel lost, I don't know where I'm at//
And I don't know where I came from, but I wanna go back//
I find I'm not fittin' in, it's just soo hard to adapt//
And even harder to breath, I'm havin' panic attacks//
I can't manage myself, I couldn't handle my cash//
So if you step to my face you'll get dismantled soo fast//
You know who's backin' me up, it's Mr. Scandlous Spratt//
We're just some mainiac rappers and we're makin' this last//
And the fake's will be passed, and we ain't breakin' the rules//
But if you get in our way, we're gonna take ya' to school//
Ain't no competition here, I ain't racin' with you//
'Cause I could lyrically lace you while I'm wasted on booze//
So just face it, you lose, I can't erase all you fools//
Although I'm wishin' I could, I can't replace all the cruel//
So I disgrace all you know, me and the haters ain't cool//
And if this game needs a player, there ain't no drainin' my fuel//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Face It

Postby Robbie G » Aug 2nd, '08, 13:47

It was good but I didn't think it was anything special compared to what you usually post.

My favorite line:

Ain't no competition here, I ain't racin' with you//
'Cause I could lyrically lace you while I'm wasted on booze//


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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Face It

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 2nd, '08, 14:48

Shady Babie wrote:It was good but I didn't think it was anything special compared to what you usually post.

My favorite line:

Ain't no competition here, I ain't racin' with you//
'Cause I could lyrically lace you while I'm wasted on booze//


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Haha, thanks a lot man.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Face It

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 2nd, '08, 18:32

McMaybe wrote:Some people may not see this, but this is one of the best hype track lyrics I've seen in years. It's amazing.

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Thanks much brother, really appreciated.
Did you get a chance to hear "Scatter" yet? I don't remember if you already told me or not, lol.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Face It

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 2nd, '08, 19:00

that was real kool,i realy liked the opening lines,i guess thats what catches a readers-in our case attention,everythung was spot on.....
peace

P.S:after reading this,it makes me feel like takin the time out to rhyme,havnt had the chance to do that in years..
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Face It

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 2nd, '08, 19:02

Arabian Shady wrote:that was real kool,i realy liked the opening lines,i guess thats what catches a readers-in our case attention,everythung was spot on.....
peace

P.S:after reading this,it makes me feel like takin the time out to rhyme,havnt had the chance to do that in years..

Eh man, thanks a lot. Havn't heard from you in a little bit, hope all is well.
And best of luck with the writting, haha.
Get back on that dope shit you were spittin' before.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Face It

Postby SkinNBlista » Aug 3rd, '08, 02:22

Good Read :y:
Whateva u wanna say, go ahead coz we dont play.
Every word taken to heart, supersensitive, arent u smart.
So how next r u gonna use it, laugh in my face is to abuse it.
Remember me G, coz i'm gonna live til I'm an OAP.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Face It

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 3rd, '08, 20:57

its more like an intro/anthem otherwise it wouldnt work well as a serious song
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Face It

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 3rd, '08, 21:04

Kaotic wrote:its more like an intro/anthem otherwise it wouldnt work well as a serious song

You think so? I recorded this on a beat last night and it actually fits it pretty well. I already got a 2nd verse done, just gotta finish the 3rd and do a hook. But I personally think it sounds pretty good.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Face It

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 4th, '08, 04:07

thats just my opinion, i may think different if u had more verses added then i could see u tie it in there somehow sorry Steve, ive seen u write better than this...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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