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Freekey From Me

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 5th, '08, 22:59

today Makes Me Sick Lately It's Neo Con People Gone outside Legal Wrongs droppin Evil Bombs
they protect Investments Bring Weapons and never leave like chemical weapons after Ingestion

tha revolutionaries Their No Joke u'll know when tha Barrel Smokes tha devils own are Baptized In Sin
so Live Aware that they could Strip Ya Shares of tha american dream and leave us all Chastized Within

why do I Spit Conspiricy cuz I let This Spirit Free cuz I don't believe in Containment times are Changing
even at my Arraignment it's still gonna be Rainin' so just let um know their gonna do some Explaining

to my Last Breath as I Ask Death who Rapped Best from hear on out I leave every Track Wrecked
I'm poor but I could Have Less no lie I'd love to be cashing Fat Checks but for now I'll Trash Stress

it's pretty Nice Out tho problems trail me Like Clouds still I spit these Tight Rounds that I Write Down
I'm never putting tha Mic Down I'm a shining soul with a diamond flow that menas u can get Iced Now!
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Re: Freekey From Me

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 5th, '08, 23:01

oh, yeah, that shit was very tight! :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Freekey From Me

Postby Wallace » Aug 8th, '08, 20:55

why do I Spit Conspiricy cuz I let This Spirit Free cuz I don't believe in Containment times are Changing


I like how you use a flow with 4 beats, in place of the normal with 2 beats...
piece was nice as usual, I'm in those things too of conspiracy and will to free my spirit from the jail of teh society. I know about some real hidden things :shifty:
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Re: Freekey From Me

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 9th, '08, 20:41

dude that shit was tight!!!!!!
i think your rhymes were abnormaly long this time,cause the writing was puney this time :D
sick sick stuff bro :b:
peace

P.S: could you review mine as well, its called LOOSE CHANGE
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Freekey From Me

Postby The GameKeeper » Aug 11th, '08, 15:03

that shit was doooooooooooooooooooooooooooooope...

"Tell me where were the weapons of mass destruction
I guess Sadamn musta stuck em up his fuckin ass and dumped em..."

Thats a line I wrote for a sing I had a while back called "End of Site"...

if you into the whole conspiracy thing like I am... go to abovetopsecrtet.com... alot of crazy shit on that site... alot of truth about our crooked ass government...

I like your flow... you strech it out... you flow kind of like Royce used too...
'D-Luckz'
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