NEW STEVE SPAG - SAD DAY

[Steve Spag]

I got this solo track called "Sad Day" for my LP coming up, but I'm also doing a remix with a couple other people. This peice here is the remix verse. I just wrote this one up yesterday. Hopefully you get the flow for it. I'd show you guys the beat, but I don't wanna ruin the song, lol. Anyways, let me know what ya' think.

i don't know what it is//
but when i get in this depressive state of mind, man i just wanna quit//
peace out, it's time for me to dip//
you keep reaching out to me but i got nothing to give//
just my love of this pen is all that's driving me//
fuck jen and the unnamed, and all my enemies//
i ain't no kid mclovin', i'm just a troubled steve//
another sick emcee, a fish just in a sea//
i wish that i could be, fullfilling all my dreams//
eternal ecstacy, a thousand pounds of weed//
a deal for my cd's, a meal and a big screen//
a house on top a hill, and no pills for milk and cheese//
i need to see a change, this life is very lame//
and if it is a game, it still can not be saved//
no matter if you pray, you still will see a grave//
i'll face mine when it comes, but just remember me//

Note's: The McLovin' line is 'cause people for some reason say I look like him, lmao.
The line about "pills for milk and cheese" is 'cause I'm lactose-intallorant. I gotta take pills with everything lmao.

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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[Rain Matrix]

way to flow man keep it real

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed, both of you.
And yeah Chet, the actual song itself is A LOT different than that peice, lol. You got nothing to worry about, haha.

Keeep the feed coming please.

[SkinNBlista]

that was a good read, i like ur writing
its emotive

[Ka0t1c]

dope, that means its great keep em going

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed everyone, it's greatly appreciated.....I think that Robert dude took it to another level though lmao....

Keep the feed comin', each opinion matters, lol.

[Arabian Shady]

that had the MOST incredible flow man, the beginin reminded me of "run rabbit run" in a way,i havnt had the time to POST reviews alot but this just makes the time worth bro
sick stuff
Peace

[Steve Spag]

:worship:
that had the MOST incredible flow man, the beginin reminded me of "run rabbit run" in a way,i havnt had the time to POST reviews alot but this just makes the time worth bro
sick stuff
Peace

Damn man, thanks for the feed, haha. Glad you enjoyed it.

[Solace]

Just like Arabian Shady, it reminded me of Rabbit Run. It was pretty sick

I liked this line:

you keep reaching out to me but i got nothing to give//

PS. Lactose Intollerant? I feel bad for you

[Robbie G]

I wasn't really feeling it until the middle. Wasn't bad though.

Interested in hearing the beat and how this flows because I think it could be good.

[Jay-19]

It's pretty tight, but I'd rather see the original one instead of this since you say the original is way better than this remix. Anyway it was okay, nothing special, but I got the flow how ever. So looking forward to hearing it!

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed everyone, glad you like this peice.
I'll post another new verse sometime tomorrow.