"Love Is"

[Steve Spag]

Pretty dope dude. I liked the messege to it, and the flow was pretty sick aswell. You had a nice and wide vocab. aswell which is always great. I felt like the ending wasn't as strong as the begining or end, but it was still good. I do really like the hook though, it sounds pretty cool.

Can't wait to hear an audio, soooo keep it up brother.

[Arabian Shady]

dude that was pretty sick man, i liked the beginning,it had awesome flow to it,but ending like steve said was a little off the track,
hhook was dope,
i'ma download this as it comes,lol
peace

[MoBrat]

flow n lyrics were sick, hope u update with second verse when u done writing it...and hope u record and post the song im sure u'll get mad feed on it

[Robbie G]

Good stuff man, get that album out! (Don't rush it though )

[The GameKeeper]

Your on some other shit man... you have real talent my friend... your writing style is very unique and you touched on a good topic... loved the chrous and the lyrics... thats one of the best rhymes I have seen written on this site, if not the best... keep at it bro...

D*Lucks

[Xray]

damn now that's that kinda shit that i wanna listen to when Im depressed. for real man, your vocab is fuckin excellent. the way you rhymed your words were smooth as fuck.

we can loath or find a soul to save and hold our own composure,
but we lost the wars and fights for this recorded plight of danger,
bang the senates desk and break the senates neck in, choke and strangle,
soaked in painted pain, the lies are disguised as hateful regret we'll,
hold the angel close and fold the emotionless source of anger,
I propose that we just hold our own and blow this issue off us,
cause it's hard to fight a battle that I feel is already lost,

those lines are complex and catchy man, for real, every word fits in perfect. i haven't even heard the beat and the shit is flowing like a mafucker. verse is very sick.

chorus on the other hand side doesn't seem to sound like a chorus. cause its 4 bars of a solid verse. what i recon you should do for the intro is. pick a movie, and get scenes that relate to your concept. and for the chorus have those 4 bars faded as a movie scene is played. a movie scene like an classic movie where a male explains how corrupted the world is or even get a news reporter saying it. somfin like. today many life's have been taken, criminals of (wherever) have spoiled these bright streets of (wherever) or better yet a riot with a great speech being spoken. that would be some jedi mind tricks eve of war type shit. and still use those 4 bars in a verse, cause if its gonna be fadded in while a scene is played than you wont hear it as clear so having it on the verse is pretty straight forward to those that wanted to know what you were saying. hope that helps peace out. very nice piece.