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here i come..

Postby ¤°~ Jose ~¤°© » Aug 15th, '08, 04:06

haven't written anything in months which feel like years so i just wrote this :sweating:

Here i come trapped inside my ownself covered in thick cement
don't burst me open or feel my torment which you'll lament
feelin' discontent craving for oxygen just waiting to explode
searching for a living soul this a backdraft i'm in fighting mode
it's the extinguished flamez coming to life again ready for war
the lord of destruction making you hit the floor when grenades galore
a hardcore bastard worst than an entire flank of marine corps
i'm the snake eater hear me roar i'll be like Jason Bourne
a trained assassin who can't be killed you have been warned

just trying to get into that groove i used to be in :p
¤°~ Jose ~¤°©
 

Re: here i come..

Postby The Toy Soldier » Aug 15th, '08, 04:13

¤°~ Jose ~¤°© wrote:haven't written anything in months which feel like years so i just wrote this :sweating:

Here i come trapped inside my ownself covered in thick cement
don't burst me open or feel my torment which you'll lament
feelin' discontent craving for oxygen just waiting to explode
searching for a living soul this a backdraft i'm in fighting mode
it's the extinguished flamez coming to life again ready for war
the lord of destruction making you hit the floor when grenades galore
a hardcore bastard worst than an entire flank of marine corps
i'm the snake eater hear me roar i'll be like Jason Bourne
a trained assassin who can't be killed you have been warned

just trying to get into that groove i used to be in :p

koo like the flow and rhymes
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Re: here i come..

Postby M_SpAwN » Aug 21st, '08, 19:53

nice man i like
:y:
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Re: here i come..

Postby ¤°~ Jose ~¤°© » Aug 23rd, '08, 17:16

thanx :happy:
¤°~ Jose ~¤°©
 


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