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MY INNER STRUGGLES

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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 23rd, '08, 12:46

lol Xray was about to have a heart attack, so i told him to keep breathin and buy a nebulizer,haha
thnx for the review man,realli appreciate all the support,i'ma try and keep the momentum going but i'm afraid that i might end up being monotonous,get what i mean?? cause you cant rhyme about your shit of a government or your,ie. Mine, indecisivness all athe time? if I TRULY am unique, whats more in the world that ya'll relate to? lol so i gotta set aside a few things and work on my latest, :sweating: MORE REVIEW PPL :worship:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Jay-19 » Aug 24th, '08, 20:37

This was really good!
The concept and meaning in it is really genuine and deep from the feel I get from it. It seems like you're really speaking the truth in this piece. You got some dope rhymes with great flow to it. I don't know what else to say then really good job man! Keep this up, you got those lyrical skills! :y:
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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 25th, '08, 12:02

:worship: :worship:
thanks alot man,appreciate this,my new drop will be up in a couple of day,on a whole new plane :8)
MORE REVIEW'S IF POSSIBLE :flower:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby notoriouS-K-M » Aug 25th, '08, 18:10

Yo man great piece. I dug it. U know I really liked the message. Keep it up. I've been outta town, tht's why it took me a long time to post a comment.
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Re: MY INNER STRUGGLES

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 25th, '08, 18:27

thnx alot man, its kool, glad you took out the time to check it out :flower:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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