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Go Getter

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Go Getter

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 28th, '08, 03:30

im a go getter cuz im a flow spitter
and many are so bitter cuz i grow bigger
but that shows figures to gold diggers
yet they're no hitters cuz a mode's triggered
in my skull quicker, are they sippin malt liquor
cuz they're slippin like there's soap sittin
on the floor, are they coke sniffers?
many whores want it hardcore
but i won't spend on them anymore
nope - quit your old tricks and
enter the ropes, i'll give you the chore
my whole dick in your throat
til you choke from the chicken
bitch you'll adore every inch in
now interest must soar
that's for penny pinchin
ima get you to poor (pour)
think it's a joke
don't make me mention the morgue...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Go Getter

Postby Emadyville » Aug 28th, '08, 03:37

Started off half decent and went downhill. Rhymes weren't bad though.
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


I love you Daren
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Re: Go Getter

Postby Robbie G » Aug 28th, '08, 03:39

I thought it was pretty good.

Beginning reminds me so much of the d12 song drill on kon artis verse i think. either that or a banks song lol.
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Re: Go Getter

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 28th, '08, 04:50

haha, thanx, just messin around a bit, tryna find some pivot points
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Go Getter

Postby enjinn » Aug 29th, '08, 19:16

had a good flow
each one teaches one
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