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New Robert20032

Postby robert20032 » Aug 31st, '08, 18:34

Just made this peice a couple days ago. It's got a really different flow for it, kinda similar to my track "Scatter". There are also a lot of pauses in the song and streching of ending words, but I'm sure you'll figure out the flow. The beat is called "Fuck The Rest" by Rapitfly over on soundclick if anyone's interested in checking it out. Anyways, I know this isn't my best lyrical peice or anything, I just did this for fun to experiment with a flow, but let me know what ya' think.

i got a mission to spit to all these lame flowers//
they wanna step to me, they know it's game over//
you ain't no gang soldiers, ain't up in no range rover's//
i ain't takin' orders, i ain't ever stayin' sober//
i get no hang overs//
one day i'll be makin' soo much cash they'll be calling me the bank closer//
so keep coming at me//
i'll be standing on my porch with a motherfuckin' flame thrower//
and i'm feelin' really silly tonight//
that caffene's in my body 'cause i just drank soda//
and i ain't even rappin' to you right now//
'cause i'm stuck in a fuckin' dang coma//
but the prank's over//
and if you got some weed at your house, guaranteed i'm gonna race over//
i wanna be bigger than "la vida loca"//
soo much fame i could re-place oprah//

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Re: New Robert20032

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 31st, '08, 18:48

who the fuck are you man? stop jockin my shit.
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Re: New Robert20032

Postby neversnooze » Aug 31st, '08, 21:15

robert this is called plaiarism its when u steal some elses(steve spagz) work

by the way i liked the ending on this steve :wave:
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Re: New Robert20032

Postby Solace » Sep 1st, '08, 00:43

i think this is a joke that he thinks we'll laugh at but its really stupid.


its as if he thinks no one read that topic already, or heard Scatter.

Fuck off Robert.

@Steve, i liked it, :y:
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