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Postby robert20032 » Aug 14th, '08, 22:37

I got this solo track called "Sad Day" for my LP coming up, but I'm also doing a remix with a couple other people. This peice here is the remix verse. I just wrote this one up yesterday. Hopefully you get the flow for it. I'd show you guys the beat, but I don't wanna ruin the song, lol. Anyways, let me know what ya' think.

i don't know what it is//
but when i get in this depressive state of mind, man i just wanna quit//
peace out, it's time for me to dip//
you keep reaching out to me but i got nothing to give//
just my love of this pen is all that's driving me//
fuck jen and the unnamed, and all my enemies//
i ain't no kid mclovin', i'm just a troubled steve//
another sick emcee, a fish just in a sea//
i wish that i could be, fullfilling all my dreams//
eternal ecstacy, a thousand pounds of weed//
a deal for my cd's, a meal and a big screen//
a house on top a hill, and no pills for milk and cheese//
i need to see a change, this life is very lame//
and if it is a game, it still can not be saved//
no matter if you pray, you still will see a grave//
i'll face mine when it comes, but just remember me//

Note's: The McLovin' line is 'cause people for some reason say I look like him, lmao.
The line about "pills for milk and cheese" is 'cause I'm lactose-intallorant. I gotta take pills with everything lmao.

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Re: New Robert20032

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 15th, '08, 01:00

eh faggot, take my shit down.
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Re: New Robert20032

Postby Solace » Sep 1st, '08, 00:45

Why is this dick copying all your shit, Steve?
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Re: New Robert20032

Postby neversnooze » Sep 1st, '08, 00:58

more plagerism by robert20032
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