Im getting stronger.

[The Toy Soldier]

I called you a w igger
but you called my a failure
i called you a wanker
you called me a faker
of pain...but now i reign
over your sorry punk ass
shatter you like a glass
break you like skinny twigs
youll yell out my name MIGGS!
compared to mine your arms look like cigs
and u know this shit aint rigged
i was naturally stronger no need to lie
composed in mind now im looking fly
tell me you want my life,youd have yours die
like kanye said, you goin touch the sky
ill see you later gotta go bye bye
dont wanna have you affixiating
or have you contemplating
that you got ur ass owned by somone who couldnt even bench a 45
now you know im full of life cuz i wil lthrive,nurish and survive

[Jay-19]

To be honest, that wasn't good at all. The "rhymes" are just toooooo simple, and you don't even rhyme in some lines. And what are you writing about, seriously? This is so played out anything can get. This isn't creative writing, this is just plain writing.

Pull yourself together and write something good!

[The Toy Soldier]

To be honest, that wasn't good at all. The "rhymes" are just toooooo simple, and you don't even rhyme in some lines. And what are you writing about, seriously? This is so played out anything can get. This isn't creative writing, this is just plain writing.

Pull yourself together and write something good!

im bored i have no inspiration i know you guys use to like what i posted but now its like im a cookie thats crumbling after not being eaten.

this is bullshit ithink ima quit.

[The Toy Soldier]

I say it's pretty good, considering your age

lightyears ahead of me when I was ur age

don't feel bad...your just gonna get better and better over time...

but if your gonna talk about quitting, then I don't see you ever becoming a good rapper

this shit takes time...you think sajjad sounded good when he started?

did he suck or something?

[Robbie G]

everyone sucks at the start...no one starts out good at writing, or rapping

Not true. I've always been good.

To be honest it wasn't bad it was just way to simple. Keep it up though don't get discouraged.

[The Toy Soldier]

everyone sucks at the start...no one starts out good at writing, or rapping

Not true. I've always been good.

To be honest it wasn't bad it was just way to simple. Keep it up though don't get discouraged.

kinda sounded egotistical for a moment lol

i made a new topic, that one i actually thought about in depth on the topic.

[Solace]

It wasnt bad. Some rhymes werent really there, but it wasnt horrbile. I just think the lines could have been longer, and it wouldnt have been that bad.

Dont quit. Read your old shit and try to work some new stuff out. Write about anything, even if its about how your not writing like before.

Peace.

EDIT: I liked this line, just so you know

that you got ur ass owned by somone who couldnt even bench a 45