offensive speech

[Slim Zaddy]

Well today I’m going to talk about all of the jokes which is da relationship choke I need to take a break and then drink a coke. my through is dry I want to bought something wet before it gets die , I don’t need to hide I just need to glide beside my love side and say some staff that aint in my mind .they just come crossed by from the sky I dunno what iam sayn iam just playin cuz life shows me nothing but pain I need to improve my new affair I want it to elevated up stair cuz it’s just fare I don’t want to say something that may rattle my name off or shuffle all of pain off I just need a couple of weeks to prove that I’m aint wrong , I just did dis song to let u know that I’m to long to here form you. Don’t let me spew staff that aint pure cuz I could lure any chick to come around my zone but I’m stick wit u cuz I have faith in u as u are my long time date , I don’t want a new mate but I don’t know what ‘s behind my fate . right know I’m being so great to u don’t let me just step back and be a whack I’m not a fag if u thing that I’m a wussy ur wrong don’t let me show u the real me cuz it’s so mean u need to be like a steal to bear wit me my new deal .. So let’s think a little bit deep I want u to think so real let go of all of the confused moods and reboot ur mind and think about us getting a ride with each other through all this life till the day we die. I ‘m ready maybe ur in the steady but that’s will not be helpful, u must be grateful cuz u hev me beside all of the pain and ignorance that u showed me. Will it tends for me that i should bend all of my love trends and send them to your heart where they should halt and end. If they won’t, then I will not pretend that you’re no more my girlfriend. so let me just say that’s u have just lose a very unique man who exists in this plant so for god sake just forget me maybe u will regret me but I hve just wiped u from my side I will let ur feeling that was insdie to glide into a huge sea and just evaporate cuz that's the end of my fate .. and try to find for yourself a new boyfriend better than me as may think..

[Emadyville]

my through is dry I want to bought something wet before it gets die

What the hell does that mean?

[Slim Zaddy]

my through is dry I want to bought something wet before it gets die

What the hell does that mean?

well ,, let go of it cuz i do it on rush . what do u think of the rest

[neversnooze]

this was wack sorry try again

[Ka0t1c]

i think he meant "throat", bought means buy... pretty poor writing

so this is what i think he means...

my throat is dry, i want to buy something wet before....???

my through is dry I want to bought something wet before it gets die

[SajN]

First of all... please fix the structure..

[Slim Zaddy]

okay thanks for your answers .. i will write better again ..

[enjinn]

you got potential...just make your lines shorter and use more multies

[Slim Zaddy]

you got potential...just make your lines shorter and use more multies

thanks enjinn , i will take ur advice .

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[Solace]

separate the lines cause its way to hard to read.

[Arabian Shady]

PLUs that makes the "verse" look like a novel,think carefully about what you write, so that your straight to the point.try reading verses by ppl who have good structural command,maybe then it might be readable.
it needs tons of work but you'll get around
Peace

Read Mine its called FRONT PAGE

[Slim Zaddy]

PLUs that makes the "verse" look like a novel,think carefully about what you write, so that your straight to the point.try reading verses by ppl who have good structural command,maybe then it might be readable.
it needs tons of work but you'll get around
Peace

Read Mine its called FRONT PAGE

ya okay next time ., i will be more organized .. thanks for the comment ..