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NEW STEVE SPAG - Game Over (Fun Verse)

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NEW STEVE SPAG - Game Over (Fun Verse)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 31st, '08, 17:48

Just made this peice a couple days ago. It's got a really different flow for it, kinda similar to my track "Scatter". There are also a lot of pauses in the song and streching of ending words, but I'm sure you'll figure out the flow. The beat is called "Fuck The Rest" by Rapitfly over on soundclick if anyone's interested in checking it out. Anyways, I know this isn't my best lyrical peice or anything, I just did this for fun to experiment with a flow, but let me know what ya' think.

i got a mission to spit to all these lame flowers//
they wanna step to me, they know it's game over//
you ain't no gang soldiers, ain't up in no range rover's//
i ain't takin' orders, i ain't ever stayin' sober//
i get no hang overs//
one day i'll be makin' soo much cash they'll be calling me the bank closer//
so keep coming at me//
i'll be standing on my porch with a motherfuckin' flame thrower//
and i'm feelin' really silly tonight//
that caffene's in my body 'cause i just drank soda//
and i ain't even rappin' to you right now//
'cause i'm stuck in a fuckin' dang coma//
but the prank's over//
and if you got some weed at your house, guaranteed i'm gonna race over//
i wanna be bigger than "la vida loca"//
soo much fame i could re-place oprah//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Game Over (Fun Verse)

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 31st, '08, 19:09

LOL, it was funny , the livin the vida loca line was nice.
the flow was kool man,no problems with it
:y: peace
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Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Game Over (Fun Verse)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 31st, '08, 19:12

Arabian Shady wrote:LOL, it was funny , the livin the vida loca line was nice.
the flow was kool man,no problems with it
:y: peace

good lookin' out bro, thanks much.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Game Over (Fun Verse)

Postby SajN » Sep 1st, '08, 13:56

Nice verse :p
last two lines were great :happy: :y:

You have these nice multies going out throughout the whole verse, so good job on that :y:

Flow is not a problem.

Good good!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Game Over (Fun Verse)

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 1st, '08, 16:10

yeah, this piece is FIRE! :y: :y: =D> :devil: :stretcher: :rock:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Game Over (Fun Verse)

Postby Steve Spag » Sep 1st, '08, 16:24

Thanks for the feed guys, it's greatly appreciated as always.

Keeep the feed comin'.

And good to hear from ya' Infection, havn't seen ya' around as much, lol.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Game Over (Fun Verse)

Postby SajN » Sep 1st, '08, 18:05

Steve Spag wrote:And good to hear from ya' Infection, havn't seen ya' around as much, lol.

I haven't been very much here in Creative Section .. I had little writer's block :sweating: + I check Audio Section now more than this .. but i think I'm back for this too now ;)

Looking forward for more of you :y:
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