tell me what you think of this lyric piece of my song

[tjb]

here comes obama toward the office, this wannabe president
if he gets into the white house i might not wanna be a resident

cuz i set precendents, an the american people, are out of his league
he'll raise the taxes so high, i wont be able to pay his fees ,

as the blacks get in free and poor get free tuition
but i got this intuition, this voice in my head

that he'll screw up this country so bad we''ll all be in code red
so obama come get me try to shut me up cuz im endless with this shit and ill fuck ya up

so bow to the rookie like lil bow wow cuz im the up an comin greatest in this goddamn showdown an
you can jump like u on a trampoline when i burst in and ill start this shit like im sparking wit flint

an ill blow ya ass up all over the place
and al sharpton better not scream hate crime cuz its got nothin to so with race

[Emadyville]

fuck mccain

[Ka0t1c]

i think its horrible, sorry

[The Toy Soldier]

i think its horrible, sorry

this

and tjb, obama would fucking own mccain shit at lkeast hes helping half of the nations friggin population or did you forget that you racist?

[Urban Punk]

Well although I don’t live in the state’s I stand by my man Obama (My aunt work’s for him) but that’s just me, as for the lyrics Hmm.. I don’t really know what to say maybe just keep writing and I’m sure you will improve