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it's just life

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it's just life

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 5th, '08, 17:35

People wandering
Walking and talking
Fears and the very same tears
Trying to find answers
To achieve some great goal
Seeking that piece
That makes them feel whole
It's So Very Hard
When you think you've found
That your quest is done
Only to realize
That its just begun
Life is a journey
Not a destination
Filled with frustration and anticipation
It's Not Black and White
A "Yes" or a "No"
It's so damn difficult
To find which way to go
Answers elude you
And reasons are few
You've got only your heart
To know what you should do
It's Not the Easy Road
Following your heart
It can hurt you so bad
That it tears you apart
Its the only way to live
Though it will get you hurt
At times it may feel
Like you're down in the dirt
But true love is out there
Waiting for you
And its worth all the struggle
That you may go through.

hope you like the flow this time .. :)
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Re: it's just life

Postby Emadyville » Sep 5th, '08, 17:48

Pretty good, I liked it, I looked at it more of poetry then of a song.
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Re: it's just life

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 5th, '08, 17:58

Emadyville wrote:Pretty good, I liked it, I looked at it more of poetry then of a song.


glad you like it :)
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Re: it's just life

Postby Urban Punk » Sep 5th, '08, 18:02

I agree wit Emadyville it read's more like poetry though I felt that you kept inside the context of what you were trying to say and it paid off… nice work bro :y:
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Re: it's just life

Postby Evanz19 » Sep 5th, '08, 20:03

Amazing :y: Very deep and meaningful but like Emadyviile i read it as a poem. :worship:
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Re: it's just life

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 5th, '08, 22:50

Urban Punk wrote:I agree wit Emadyville it read's more like poetry though I felt that you kept inside the context of what you were trying to say and it paid off… nice work bro :y:



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Re: it's just life

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 5th, '08, 22:52

Evanz19 wrote:Amazing :y: Very deep and meaningful but like Emadyviile i read it as a poem. :worship:



thanks bro :D
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