Greatest Problem

[Ka0t1c]

i am now braggin, don't call me a liar
but i'm like a dragon cuz i spit fire
i see you're not laughin, you're fallin out the run
but me, i'm just havin fun at number one

you may not like me and hate what i do
but today you'll invite me cuz i made something new
in my cave i was writing, not playing a tune
then came the lights, bringin Kaotic's soon

mixtape that's all right, so great and it's due
cuz my game is way tight and my aim's towards the moon
i am brave and i'm bright plus i crave to consume
the air waves in the sky, while i inflate like a baloon

with the fame at full flight, i won't trade but resume
i'm like a train in the night, til i fade to my tomb
i'm not afraid, nor i fright but wait for my album
it's crazy, a sight that creates my greatest problems

[Emadyville]

Eh it was alright, not bad, but not great

Edit: yes the part Steve mentioned was pretty tight, I should have been more specific. The rest I just wasn't feeling.

[Steve Spag]

mixtape that's all right, so great and it's due
cuz my game is way tight and my aim's towards the moon
i am brave and i'm bright plus i crave to consume
the air waves in the sky, while i inflate like a baloon

with the fame at full flight, i won't trade but resume
i'm like a train in the night, til i fade to my tomb

Woooow man. That whole peice was nuts, but that part there just KILLED it, lol. For real, that's some dope shit. Reminds me of something I would write, lol.

Awesome shit man, keep it up

[enjinn]

you got a dope flow...and i like how you added internal rhymes...thats not easy to do...good lyrics too