NEW STEVE SPAG - KEEP BUILDIN' (MUST READ)

by **Steve Spag** » Sep 8th, '08, 22:04

Just finished writting this peice right now. Written to "Hardship Breeds Talent" by Shadowville on Soundclick if you wanna check it out. Got a really sick flow for it, which I hope you will get. Got a pretty good messege to it aswell. So check it out, and let me know what ya' think.

i'ma never give up, i have been tryin' to fiz up//
at some alarming rates quickly, i'm like a tired old wizard//
i got the power of 30, and so you're cryin' a river//
i feel useless to use it, it's like i'm diyin' to give up//
it's like i'm doin' this bad, but i still feel like a victim//
and all this rage keeps on buildin' inside of me like a prison//
it's 'bout to blow off the richter, i gotta make a decision//
i just wanna get richer, i'm sick and tired of bitchin'//
and in some time when i make it, if you're behind me or with me//
at the time of my singing, there'll be some prizes for winning//
and if my chances are bad, and i do not get a bentley//
well i'ma get in my ford and i'll be drivin' with whiskey//
it's my pride that is missing, i can't deny what's been tickin'//
and tockin' deep in my head, i've came too far to be ditchin'//
my mission's spittin' this sick shit until it flushes the system//
'cause this kid shit is fiction, i've had enough of you bitches//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008.

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by **Xray** » Sep 8th, '08, 22:12

fuck man that was crazy for real, i recon its your best.

flow was outstanding, the vocab was dope, nuttin simple, all straight fire.

10/10 for this verse crazy :y:

by **Steve Spag** » Sep 8th, '08, 22:19

Damn man, thanks much. For real, it's greatly appreciated.
:y:

by **Jay-19** » Sep 8th, '08, 22:38

Without a doubt in your top 5 in my opinion.

The flow was really, really good with some tight rhymes. You got a punching style in your rhymes, like, every line is like punch. Not punchlines, but aggressive shit, know what I mean? And I like that a lot.

my mission's spittin' this sick shit until it flushes the system//
'cause this kid shit is fiction, i've had enough of you bitches//

That's a sick rhyme man!
Really good work!
Keep it up man! :y:

by **Urban Punk** » Sep 8th, '08, 22:59

Nice verse Steve I remember when you first came on here (I had a different username “Marsh”) I commented one of you songs and I must agree wit Xray it was one of your best keep it up :y:

by **Steve Spag** » Sep 8th, '08, 23:11

KillahGoat wrote:Without a doubt in your top 5 in my opinion.

The flow was really, really good with some tight rhymes. You got a punching style in your rhymes, like, every line is like punch. Not punchlines, but aggressive shit, know what I mean? And I like that a lot.

my mission's spittin' this sick shit until it flushes the system//
'cause this kid shit is fiction, i've had enough of you bitches//

That's a sick rhyme man!
Really good work!
Keep it up man!

Thanks a lot man, I appreciate it. Glad you liked it, and glad you noticed my "punching" style, lol.

Urban Punk wrote:Nice verse Steve I remember when you first came on here (I had a different username “Marsh”) I commented one of you songs and I must agree wit Xray it was one of your best keep it up

Haha, yeah man I remember you from back then. Didn't know this was your new account. Thanks for the feed dude, glad you enjoyed it.

Keeep the feed comin' please

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Website · by **Solace** » Sep 9th, '08, 00:24

As usual that was pretty good.

I liked these lines in particular.

and tockin' deep in my head, i've came too far to be ditchin'//

and

and all this rage keeps on buildin' inside of me like a prison//
it's 'bout to blow off the richter, i gotta make a decision//

Good job. I wouldnt call it your best, i really like others better to be honest (like the verses on Smartass, and the Scatter verse).

by **neversnooze** » Sep 9th, '08, 02:42

this was well writing,it flowed and had a story to it... when u going to run out of material to write lol

jk :happy:

by **Steve Spag** » Sep 9th, '08, 03:21

McMaybe wrote:You remain the best lyricist on TR, mainly for your consistency with sick verses. I loved it, was very expressive, and each of your verses has a unique rhyme scheme, this one placed above the others in my opinion since it's similar to mine.

Keep the work up, you got a career ahead of you.

Thanks a lot man, your opinion's are always highly respected.
:b:

And thanks for everyone else's feed aswell.
@shadymademe: haha, you really like my "smartass" verses? lol, that shit is weak now, lol.
@neversnooze: merci...and not anytime soon, lol.

Website · by **Solace** » Sep 9th, '08, 03:30

Steve Spag wrote:
McMaybe wrote:You remain the best lyricist on TR, mainly for your consistency with sick verses. I loved it, was very expressive, and each of your verses has a unique rhyme scheme, this one placed above the others in my opinion since it's similar to mine.

Keep the work up, you got a career ahead of you.

Thanks a lot man, your opinion's are always highly respected.

And thanks for everyone else's feed aswell.
@shadymademe: haha, you really like my "smartass" verses? lol, that shit is weak now, lol.
@neversnooze: merci...and not anytime soon, lol.

lmao i still like it

something doesnt have to amazing to like it. we've learned that from soulja boy :flower:

by **Steve Spag** » Sep 9th, '08, 14:28

Chet wrote:I took a listen to the beat and was spitting your rhymes

Crazy beat, I really like the flow.

i just wanna get richer, i'm sick and tired of bitchin'//
and in some time when i make it, if you're behind me or with me//
at the time of my singing, there'll be some prizes for winning//
and if my chances are bad, and i do not get a bentley//
well i'ma get in my ford and i'll be drivin' with whiskey//

Some Lose Yourself type shit there. My favorites lines of the song. Love how your describing how badly you wanna make it, and telling your friend's (or gf) and they can either be with you or be left behind. And if you don't make it, your gonna be dead (driving+booze= Never a happy ending)

Love how deep just 5 lines of the verse are.

But I may looking at it 2 close.

Great job

Nah man, you see exactly what I'm saying. Glad you thought it was sick, I'm really starting to like this peice, lol.

by **SajN** » Sep 9th, '08, 14:32

ok. Forgot what I said about your last piece..
THIS ONE is your best piece (unless you come up with something better next time

)

Great rhymes and some multies :y:

Flow is sick!

I dunno what to say, cuz this was just sick!

Good Good :y:

by **Arabian Shady** » Sep 9th, '08, 19:24

STEVE SPAG ON FIRE BITCHES!!!!!!! :worship:

dude the flow is increcible , its like drivin a brand new mercedes-abso-fukin-lutely smooth.
and rhymes,DAAYMM!!,lol you had some incredible rhymes in there man, sometimes there are a few things that make a piece exeptioanlly outstanding,my friend you had each and every one of them
verdict??? ONE OF YOU ALL TIME BEST, :y: