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Re: Cat & Mouse

Postby Solace » Sep 14th, '08, 03:47

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IceKilla wrote:alright, i like the concept. there's a few flow issues, but it's pretty good man. :y: a little tweaking could find this pretty ill :8)

The version you sent me was ill man, but if i use that, itll pretty much be yours. I just took like 5 lines and put them in.

and i was flowing it in this specific way, so it was flowing perfect for me.


it's better, still a few extra words in some lines, but other than that it's pretty ill. u know what we should do.

u should do Cat & Mouse for ur EP, and i'll do Cat & Mouse (Ice Killa Remix) on my LP, or for ur EP too. that way, the world gets to see my version. so it's not stuck in pm land forever. :sweating:


Yeah good idea :y: Ill have it on my EP and you have your version on your LP and after thats all done, we should make a mixtape of stuff from both and remixes.
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Re: Cat & Mouse

Postby Requiem » Sep 14th, '08, 03:52

alright, it's settled then. :8) that's another track for both of us to work on.

we need to pick up the pace with this recording stuff, at least a little bit. i'd like to have my LP ready before next year. :confusion:
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Re: Cat & Mouse

Postby Solace » Sep 14th, '08, 03:54

IceKilla wrote:alright, it's settled then. :8) that's another track for both of us to work on.

we need to pick up the pace with this recording stuff, at least a little bit. i'd like to have my LP ready before next year. :confusion:

before 2009? Woah :O

Okay stop with posting stuff about EP+LP here, lets pm. Im guna pm you something right now.
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Re: Cat & Mouse

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 14th, '08, 12:26

just dont be spitting gangsta if you aint living it :y: and i doubt your living it
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Re: Cat & Mouse

Postby Requiem » Sep 14th, '08, 16:34

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:just dont be spitting gangsta if you aint living it :y: and i doubt your living it


everyone's got a fight song during some point in their career, and the whole drive by thing in the chorus is a common happening.
and besides, there's always that one guy that won't shut his mouth at school, and he aint back himself up. that's basically what this track is about, people who run they mouth too much. :y:

but i get what u saying, bar. if he was saying stuff like "yo, everyday i go out wit my ak," or something along those lines, then u would have to be living it, or u would just be another fake gangster. :8)
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Re: Cat & Mouse

Postby Dark Blue » Sep 14th, '08, 17:12

yeahh i liked this its pretty good :y:
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Re: Cat & Mouse

Postby Solace » Sep 14th, '08, 18:23

Thanks guys
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