new rhyme

[tjb]

kit dat, kit bak, stay lax, like your on top of the world, but ill knock u off with a finger an let hell unfurl,
an watch you curl, like up in a ball as the crowd as 20 million viewers go into appall
an ill outboast ya but bak it up like a brick wall but ur like caspa the ghost so i cant see u at all
an u might want to give 911 a call an end up er cuz u took a fall,
an i got end games an hot flames an ill put u to hot shame cuz u so like damn lame an i just do my thing an i bring the rain an the pain
so wheres ur like painkillers cuz u might want to pop an advil er two or maby three or maby four or maby more cuz im like christian rinaldo an i just scored an all u r is sprawled on the floor or the ground cuz ur like a plane an ur grounded for evr more

tell me how tht was
thanx

[Emadyville]

Potential. DO you write a lot of stuff or did you just start?

[tjb]

just started im a youngin only like 13

[Emadyville]

just started im a youngin only like 13

Only like 13? Like you are are aren't haha.

Well then keep working on it and post stuff I'll try to give you some help/advice.

[tjb]

thanx an yes i am 13 dude check like facebook or myspace for travis bresson im tellin u lol

[Emadyville]

thanx an yes i am 13 dude check like facebook or myspace for travis bresson im tellin u lol

Ha yo I believe you it's just you sais only like 13? like you didn't know or were unsure of your own age, made me laugh.