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NEW STEVE SPAG - Passive Aggression

Postby Steve Spag » Sep 14th, '08, 23:22

I was just going through some of my old raps I have written on sheets and I came across this peice I havn't shown. I wrote it to a beat by my friend Kaz called "Secrets 2", but it's not out yet, so I can't really share it with you. The flow is really stand-out on the beat though, which is why I wanted to share it with you guys. Not my best peice, but I liked the way this one turned out.

Here I am, thinking to myself in the dark//
I'm like a barkless dog but when I bite it harms//
It's gonna leave you scarred, it's gonna leave you scared//
It's like a ghost's in here, and I can't be repaired//
Okay, now let me just ask you a question//
It'll just take a second, I'ma teach you a lesson//
Are you, quite familiar with passive aggression?//
If so, just have a session, of dro, to pass the tension//
I know, life is depressin', and rap, is just a blessin'//
i'll rap, 'til my ascention, then pass, it up in Heaven//
Infact, I wanna mention, if that, is gonna happen//
I'm happy where I'm at, but I'm glad to take some action//
'Cause I, got lots of passion, and I, am gonna last//
And I try, soo very hard, so why, am I just slackin'?//
I'm good, at multi-taskin', I should, have satisfaction//
It's bull, that I don't get it, it's too long that I've been askin'//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Passive Aggression

Postby Solace » Sep 14th, '08, 23:27

i just logged on and i see this so i gotta comment

its good. Kaz or Kez? :unsure:

I'm like a barkless dog but when I bite it harms//


I liked that line :Y:

It wasnt bad, when Secrets 2 is released, could you put a link to it. I wanna hear how it would sound.

Nothing out of your ordinary Steve :y: It was good.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Passive Aggression

Postby Steve Spag » Sep 14th, '08, 23:32

shadymademe wrote:i just logged on and i see this so i gotta comment

its good. Kaz or Kez? :unsure:

I'm like a barkless dog but when I bite it harms//


I liked that line :Y:

It wasnt bad, when Secrets 2 is released, could you put a link to it. I wanna hear how it would sound.

Nothing out of your ordinary Steve :y: It was good.

Haha thanks man. And it's Kaz, not Kez from here, lol. He (Kaz) makes beats for me and Kyle Spratt occasionally. And yeah, when he wants it to be released I'll send up a link.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Passive Aggression

Postby Kez » Sep 15th, '08, 00:25

( It's secretly me :shifty: )
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Passive Aggression

Postby Solace » Sep 15th, '08, 00:47

Kez wrote:( It's secretly me :shifty: )

lmao.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Passive Aggression

Postby Emadyville » Sep 15th, '08, 01:22

Damn nice shit, :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Passive Aggression

Postby Steve Spag » Sep 15th, '08, 17:28

Emadyville wrote:Damn nice shit, :y:

Thanks much man :)
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Passive Aggression

Postby Steve Spag » Sep 15th, '08, 18:41

^^
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Wow man, I couldn't have asked for better feed, lol.
Thanks a lot bro, really really appreciated as always.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Passive Aggression

Postby Kez » Sep 15th, '08, 19:37

In other words this is sick shiznit
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Passive Aggression

Postby SajN » Sep 15th, '08, 19:57

Nice read. I liked the content :y:

*qoutes all of McMaybe's post*

That's what I wanna say to :happy: , even though I might not get everything Maybe get lol ..

But it was sick shiznit :worship:
and u know I mean it, without saying anything more!


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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Passive Aggression

Postby Steve Spag » Sep 16th, '08, 01:21

Thanks a lot guys, I know I say it a lot, but for real it's all appreciated. I don't forget who supports me, and who's always holdin' me down, I owe a lot to those of you who constantly feed me, it keeps me goin', haha.

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Passive Aggression

Postby Urban Punk » Sep 16th, '08, 11:39

I LOVED IT! For real… there’s nothing much else I can say Steve, just keep writing bro
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