verse of blood

[enjinn]

all feedback will be returned...thanks

I relate to those who are rhyming philosophy
They're ahead of their time like the mayan technology

Your thoughts are bland, im the god in man
I harboured life before it walked on land
I brawl with hands
A pacifist who fought battles, till the sword shattered
Designing cryptic shapes
That manipulate your thought patterns
I gave cavemen the rocks to form daggers
My thirst for knowledge is causing hunger
Its a common blunder
I sip the clouds and vomit thunder
Turning lead to gold by rearranging its atomic structure
Im hiding my soul, untill guidance is shown
Everything youre writing and flow
Is translated by my brain into binary code
Im trying to grow
So i can handle the test, and battle with death
To become pure light encompassed by animal flesh
Radiating heat till youre dust and bones
A fucking ghost
Leaping through time watching dinosours run the globe
Then seeing humans leave earth before the sun implodes
Cunning flow...
With vicious gore from a living god
I've written scriptures and vivid songs
Inspired by images in a crystal ball
I'll share wisdom, I'm sending the gift
Before I crush the universe by clenching my fist

[Emadyville]

I didn't find it really good, then I read it again slower, and it seems like every few lines you have a great line that just sounds good and fits well. Idk but I like it.

[enjinn]

I didn't find it really good, then I read it again slower, and it seems like every few lines you have a great line that just sounds good and fits well. Idk but I like it.

thanks for the comment!

[Slim Zaddy]

it's nice keep it up

[Kez]

Sick

[enjinn]

z_em, Kez...thanks a lot!