Soldiers is to Trenches As thugs is to streets...

[The Toy Soldier]

sometimes the world leads you to anger...
once it pushes you too far you just burst
you just pass your limits and you don't imagine anything worse, than what you see.....

Verse
sometimes, You feel the need to throw a tantrum
no one understands how You feel, You sing the anthem
you rehearse the same old dumb lines
but they aint dumb its what i see now
and without a doubt i go spititn about
random shit from love to sadness
but now this has just become a madness
I don't give a shit for other opinions
mine is what matters in this case,THIS IS MY business
but soon you'll see that im right
sometimes when people try to detest your might you put up another fight
till the end of this night you kept it going tight till the dawn of light
till the sun rises and gave you your calling to retreat your soldiers
some just keep falling some are still crawling trying to find a reason whyd you led them to fight in the first place? sound like treason? went against ur beliefs dumbass there aint no relief
your fucked now where you going you seem to want trouble? No? I'm sorry didn't mean to burst your bubble. I mean this on the double when i say that yous all corrupted
to protect a name on turf is giving up a life for insanity
war is one thing but this aint reality you shouldve thought twice now you have lost your mentality from ignorant anger to danger against a ranger, he aint on your side he is tossing you to jail, you fucking idiot you just bought yourself a first class ticket to hell! And for what? from some stupid ass nonsense about how you were disrespected? YOU MAKE NO SENSE! You said you wanted to fight to protect your name, dumbass your rumble has bought you your fame, you won't go down as a number 1 spitter you going down in history as the street ruling hitler you gave up what little shred of good life you had,now its over your tryna be Mr. Bad and it makes me sad, to see you like this, its your fault though, you caused all of this shit, your fucked now im sorry i can't bail you out, You stole a life urs is now jailed, no doubt. I'm sorry it has to be this way but no one else caused it people just followed you, think your a hero? Bitch you aint no deniro, and you sure as hell aint no fucking Pacino, I shouldve never let you watched all of those movies,its over now im done with you i thought you were my son, lately though, it feels like I have none....

i was bored idid it to write rhymes while thinking of a modern day topic, not really meant to be rapped but to work on a lil bit of multies and the such, I personally Don't like it at all but hey im sleepy I wanna hear what you think though. My structure is off I know i don't care though, like i said it isn';t very important to me but please drop a comment.

[Hadez]

i'm not exactly sure what it's about. random topics is kinda what i got out of it. it started off pretty good as if it was gonna be deep, but then it seemed like you were ramblin on about whatever. i didn't read through all of the jumbled paragraph at the end though.

but since you said you were workin on "multies" that doesn't matter i guess. but your rhymes were mostly one to two syllables. so as "multies" they aren't that good cuz they're extremely simple.

[The Toy Soldier]

i'm not exactly sure what it's about. random topics is kinda what i got out of it. it started off pretty good as if it was gonna be deep, but then it seemed like you were ramblin on about whatever. i didn't read through all of the jumbled paragraph at the end though.

but since you said you were workin on "multies" that doesn't matter i guess. but your rhymes were mostly one to two syllables. so as "multies" they aren't that good cuz they're extremely simple.

i know i was reeeeeeeaaaaly bored man, I wanted to see what you guys thought, I hate it too and I agree that it talks about random topics, kinda hard to understand what the real meaning is.