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Urban Punk - Quick Verse

Postby Urban Punk » Sep 7th, '08, 14:39



Aww just a quick key style :happy:

My concept’s undefended, like that voice in your mind,
speaking Perspective, you’re inclined to act wit, like forceful entry, my sanity empathy,
It’s simply, sym-pathy, like orchestra to sin-faney, can’t no-one see?
Down my cheek, tears leak-ed from my eyes, like elementary,
My minds in turmoil, I’m sem-i traumatised, like sty-mies twins, strapped by the thighs,
Thought’s so deep, I willow, I weep, I naval awake, still feeling A-sleep,
like a fallin sick-ill leaf, my pores start to seep, like my mind’s the puddle, and my pupil the street
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Re: Urban Punk - Key Style

Postby <Stiiccy> » Sep 8th, '08, 05:37

preety tight
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Re: Urban Punk - Key Style

Postby Xray » Sep 8th, '08, 06:03

damn punk, stop with this bullshit key style shit, that word sounds soo fucking gay.
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Re: Urban Punk - Key Style

Postby <Stiiccy> » Sep 8th, '08, 06:04

lol yeah keystyle is a preety gay word
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Re: Urban Punk - Key Style

Postby Urban Punk » Sep 8th, '08, 11:36

Hmm… LMAO at yall! k well if it's not a "Freestyle" and it's not a "Key Style" then what would you have me call it? Considering them little things you type wit are called Key's, you do know what a "key board" is rite?

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Re: Urban Punk - Quick Verse

Postby Urban Punk » Sep 8th, '08, 13:20

Will do Chet :y:
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Re: Urban Punk - Quick Verse

Postby Xray » Sep 8th, '08, 23:06

yeah no hate man, just hate that phrase :y:

yeah vocab was good shit, good drop. :y:
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Re: Six or Twelve

Postby Jay-19 » Sep 18th, '08, 23:21

Teetdiro wrote:just my two cents
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A blonde went into a pizza parlor. When she said that she‘d like a medium pizza, the clerk asked her how many pieces she‘d like to have it cut into: six or twelve. “Oh, goodness, six please,” said the blonde. “I don‘t think I could ever eat twelve.”

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Re: Six or Twelve

Postby Urban Punk » Sep 19th, '08, 20:19

Teetdiro wrote:just my two cents
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A blonde went into a pizza parlor. When she said that she‘d like a medium pizza, the clerk asked her how many pieces she‘d like to have it cut into: six or twelve. “Oh, goodness, six please,” said the blonde. “I don‘t think I could ever eat twelve.”

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