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the street - cypher collection

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 19th, '08, 00:37

this is probably the closest ill ever get to a freestyle (yes i know this is txt let me explain)


in college we were fucking around doin concept freestyles and we stuck on a beat and someone in the class picked the concept "street" so we cypher back and forth a bit, and this is a collection of the lines i came with ive structured it the best i could and also to the best way of makin sense (since maybe 2 or 3 people could spit in bewtween me so the lines didnt flow one after the other all the time) i also fed of some peoples other lines like, someone talked about the uk and us being the "same street different road" and thats how i got the there alot of differences about us and uk line from (it sorta seems outta place when reading through) i would have wrote up everyone elses lines but like 4 guys, different rapping styles, very bad sound quality = too much work for me :D

the beat wasnt agressive and it wasnt lyrical everyone was talking about expeirences and shit hence why it might seem a bit personel for cyhperin but that was the mood of the shit when we were doin it, and the beat was pretty chill aswell. i have a video of everyone and ill try upload it, but i cant find my adaptor to get my phones memory into my com, once ill find it ill upload it, although the sound quality sucks :n:

feedback is appreciated, wanne know if its worth recording this :sweating:



i know how the street works, i see how the street hurts
got alot of freinds goin round for the weak work
done it myself when i was only 15
12 hour shifts just to keep shit clean
but for now i spit mean tryna keep a tight game
but i feel ive got a squint cant find the right aim
theres alot of differences bout the us and uk
but on this dam street is still were you stay
you know that place you love but somehow hate it
the place when there's pussy your allowed to taste it
that place there's always stabbings but your always safe
coz you know the people who put the stabbing in place
n every now and again the police are even sound
coz they know your in your own turf know your around
and not running about the schemes just shaking the ground
were enemys and freinds have such a fine line
you dont find out till the knifes out in prime time
try standing with your freind 7 men around you
knowing in there minds that they all want to pound you
the only thing you can say is you better have my back
and when he does thats kool ill take my kicking like that
and even after that we kept our heads held high
coz i might have got my ass kicked but you needed 7 guys
worst are the teams that say have got you back
but five minutes in they just slip out the back
we were standing at the front as the enemy is coming
turn round like quick hand me something
said they had a bat a knife and a brick
im looking at this guy like gimme one prick
they bail and leg it we're standing ourselves
so we just look laugh and start pacing outselves
i swear these streets had me racing through hell
this is just me tracing to tell a little bit about this
this is what i used to do but i dont shout this
coz i know now im better of without this
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Re: the street - cypher collection

Postby Emadyville » Sep 19th, '08, 00:42

Damn, sick shit :y:
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Re: the street - cypher collection

Postby SajN » Sep 19th, '08, 09:27

Good good :y:

Some lines were good, some were aight, some were really good!

I think you should record it, but not as a whole song with hook...
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Re: the street - cypher collection

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 19th, '08, 17:51

thanx both :worship:
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Re: the street - cypher collection

Postby mcZu » Sep 19th, '08, 21:21

NIce lyrics, would rather see the video to see how it flows :y:
But the lyrics are quite good for a freestyle, nice job man :y:
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Re: the street - cypher collection

Postby Kez » Sep 20th, '08, 19:38

Damn as if you freestyle in College

You're living the dream :shifty:

As for the lyrics they were sick :y: Especially for freestyles
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Re: the street - cypher collection

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 21st, '08, 11:50

mcZu wrote:NIce lyrics, would rather see the video to see how it flows :y:
But the lyrics are quite good for a freestyle, nice job man :y:


yeh ill try get it up when i find the dam adaptor thing and thanks man :worship:


Kez wrote:Damn as if you freestyle in College

You're living the dream :shifty:

As for the lyrics they were sick :y: Especially for freestyles



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Re: the street - cypher collection

Postby Kez » Sep 21st, '08, 12:27

Also get the video up! :shifty:
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Re: the street - cypher collection

Postby Xray » Sep 21st, '08, 17:24

pretty dope, definitely got that street feel to it. starting lines are crazy :b:
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Re: the street - cypher collection

Postby ilovemeghan » Sep 22nd, '08, 00:16

impressive :y:
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