More to Come (Broadcasting...)

[Ka0t1c]

better than the one before
but i still have more to come
i've got something in store
because i'm in the front at war
i'm gonna run the board
and i'm not fallin short
because i wanna have fun of all sorts
i belong on this court
so i'm callin the shots
abort or rot your corpse
from me ballin you up
you think you're hot of course
but your spot isn't tough
i just watched you "sport"
you are undoubtedly soft
you should rebound with full force...

[Emadyville]

The beginning wasn't great but it picked up, didn't like the last line tho. Overall good job

[Ka0t1c]

ok, thanx for your input, i agree with you

[Requiem]

i liked it, consistent flow, good imagery, and great use of words