NEW STEVE SPAG - Game Show (HOT)

[Steve Spag]

I wrote and recorded this some-time during the summer. It's a track called "Game Show" on another rapper's album coming up, and I got the 2nd verse. There's a certain flow for it, which I hope you get, 'cause it rides the beat pretty sick, lol. Anyways, let me know what ya' think, all feedback is always appreciated.

step right up, just give me 5 bucks//
and i'll let you star in my game show//
no cunts allowed, but brings blunts in pounds//
'cause you know i don't mess with no skank hoe's//
i got the same foes as before, with the lame flows//
and they always dress in plain clothes//
no style for them, they ain't wild on pens//
they just fake who they are 'cause i say so//
and if you party with us, pour some gin in a cup//
but you better not pay with no pacos//
'cause it's canada here, we got a tan on our rear's//
'cause we're on the streets, you better lay low//
and if you're messin' with our crew, we're a weapon in the booth//
we're like a rocket launcher in halo//
with unlimited rounds, so we're winning this now//
you motherfucker's should have really stayed home//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

Leave Feedback Please

[Ka0t1c]

i like the style of this piece but some of the lyrics i dont like just cuz i cant relate to it but it's actually structured nicely, pretty complex pattern.

keep it goin!

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

lol @ saying your own stuff's hot in the title

[Steve Spag]

i like the style of this piece but some of the lyrics i dont like just cuz i cant relate to it but it's actually structured nicely, pretty complex pattern.

keep it goin!

Thanks much man, appreciated.

lol @ saying your own stuff's hot in the title

Hahaa, brings more people to look at it sometimes.

[Solace]

Pretty nice man, couldnt get the flow in some areas, so ill wait to hear the track.

[Arabian Shady]

i liked this in general, the flow becomes off at certain points but its cause of the structure,reali complex shit,i read it the second time and its kool,made sense after the first time lol
highly complex structures are diff to read in text,but this was wiked
i wana hear the song, check out how it flows to a beat
Sick stuff
Peace

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed guys, glad you like it.

I'll deffinetly upload the song once he gives me the okay to do so. I'm just waiting 'til he releases his album because it's gonna be on there. Then you'll see how I flowed it up, lol.

[Xray]

yeah a couple rhymes are missing but that sometimes means that the flow is good.

good drop never the less