Burn You Down (Feat. Ice Killa)

[Arabian Shady]

it's going to be a sweet track i think we're the biggest presence on the creative writing section right now. besides steve spag.

I workin now, wait till i come back, .....
Nice rhymes, easy flow to it, i'ma download it as it comes bro
Peace

haha we waiting

yeah thanks, you better download it haha jk.

you better be, or i'ma have some 2 suicide bomb your crib,muwahahahahaha
j/k its good to support, bring it in

[Ka0t1c]

i dont like it, are u guys highschoolers??? ne ways it's 2008 and its time to step it up... A LOT

[Solace]

i dont like it, are u guys highschoolers??? ne ways it's 2008 and its time to step it up... A LOT

im only 13. why does 2008 mean i gotta step up, its been 2008 for a while now and i just started writing a couple months ago...Whatever man, thanks for checking it out.

EDIT: Alright, fixed up my verse (hopefully). Anyone got something to say?

[Emadyville]

Ok reread. For freestyling his verse wasn't bad, but overall it just seems so bland, like typical shit I'd hear or read, the rhymes weren't bad but the content was weak. Just didn't like it bro.

[Rain Matrix]

decent drop from both of u

tha one thing I will remark on is shadymademe's verse
instead of saying "most of" yur shit is wack I would have said "All Of"

IDK maybe by saying all of tha aforementioned weren't wack
u were detaching tha hater label from yurself

[Solace]

decent drop from both of u

tha one thing I will remark on is shadymademe's verse
instead of saying "most of" yur shit is wack I would have said "All Of"

IDK maybe by saying all of tha aforementioned weren't wack
u were detaching tha hater label from yurself

thanks, "decent" means a lot coming from you (your a good lyricist )

the reason its "most of" is because yeah i dont wanna seem like complete hater.

edit: @Emadyville, alright, thanks you checked it out anyways

[Requiem]

alright, added some to my verse. and i think shadymademe extended his too. hopefully sounds like a little more content

thx for the comments above ^

[The Toy Soldier]

Nice Shit I dig it.

[Ka0t1c]

iceKilla, i like your verse, it was very well written and expressed, props on the extended part, u showed that u can add some more material to an already put together piece without making it lose its value it had before. so keep it up! i really see much improvement

[Solace]

Thanks so much Toy Soldier and Koatic.

Someone changing theyre review makes me feel so much better about this piece =) Yeah his verse was ill i have to say.

[Requiem]

iceKilla, i like your verse, it was very well written and expressed, props on the extended part, u showed that u can add some more material to an already put together piece without making it lose its value it had before. so keep it up! i really see much improvement

thx man really apreciated.