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[Ka0t1c]

just takin my boots off, i've had a long day
now i'm makin a new song, ive got something to say
i've been breakin a few laws, so to God I must pray
cuz i'm shakin, it's true but nothing's goin my way

what can i do cuz i'm lost like a stray
i have gotten no clue from my causes to stay
i'm an outcast, one who's cost me lots of my pay
but the boss that it's to i must resolve or betray

could i solve it, i'm thru, my thoughts aren't ok...

[Steve Spag]

Haha, pretty sick dude. First part was awesome, my favourite part of it.

just takin my boots off, i've had a long day
now i'm makin a new song, ive got something to say
i've been breakin a few laws, so to God I must pray
cuz i'm shakin, it's true but nothing's goin my way

I could picture that as a hook. Let's do a collab lmao.

[Ka0t1c]

sure! hit me up with an idea