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Global state of mind

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Global state of mind

Postby mcZu » Oct 4th, '08, 22:09

This is like a expirement, wrote this when I was listening to the ''NY state of mind'' instrumental, hence the titel named ''Global state of mind''... It didn't turn out bad, but I would like to have some feedback. Especially constructive, 'cause I wanna turn this ina actual track if I have the time to finish it... :sweating:


-Global state of mind-

I leave the rest spooked out like they are possessed
As the whole globe is setting his eyes on me like obsessed
'cause they can't spit from in but can spit out like they confessed
Not like me, I always use my poetry, to sink deep in my thoughts as an submarine
Dwelling in my own sea, an ocean off lyrics they just condensed
Turning into smog flowing over my paper like a clowd commenced
When I let my mindstate hit the clowd, it's like global heat turns cold
Meaning my lyrics flood out like rain from my mind like liquid gold
Then I start to write, it seems everthing I touch turns into gold
fades over from normal metals and paper to gold like the sunset
dividing the day and night with my mind,What's next?
After the rain comes sunshine, meaning the process is done after recording the song
First raining over the beat like a pharoah
Then watch the sunset go down like lovers do
The night kicks in to protect the gold, then it fades away like undone
Resolting in a end result wich is a heated track like the Sun
It turns out mixing the day and Night like intertwined
is what happens when Zu is in a global state of mind...

Feedback please :flower:
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Re: Global state of mind

Postby mcZu » Oct 5th, '08, 19:50

13 views and no one gives feed....damn... :sweating:
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